Reviews for Dawn of The Talon

Stonehenge 2008-07-28 ch 1,	abuseKeep writing. It's good. Stonehenge
NeoSpearBlade 2008-05-22 ch 1,	abuse"There was something strange about these clouds, they were emitting an odd purple glow and the lightning was all being attracted to a centralized point with the clouds." I don't know why, but supernatural stuff or sci-fi stuff in Ace Combat always seem to go hand in hand. Please continue!
zoneender 2008-05-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like were this is going ive always liked the talon and from what it looks like the thing in the cloud is gonna be a talon? im lookibng forward to the next chapter