 Starinity 2008-05-14 . chapter 1The idea of the story was good. A lot of major flaws.
1. Sakura's eyes aren't cerulean.
2. There aren't One hundred ninety-six billion seven hundred eighty-four thousand six hundred fifty thousand seconds in 10 years. You calculated wrong.
In 10 years, there are:
120 months
520 Weeks
3,652 Days
87,658 Hours
5,259,487 Minutes
315,569,260 Seconds
3. Some gramatical errors too. |