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Eternal Grey
2008-11-01 . chapter 1
wow that was just amazing. I hated how she wasted her time on him but whatever she shouldn't just be waiting
Starinity
2008-05-14 . chapter 1
The idea of the story was good. A lot of major flaws.

1. Sakura's eyes aren't cerulean.
2. There aren't One hundred ninety-six billion seven hundred eighty-four thousand six hundred fifty thousand seconds in 10 years. You calculated wrong.

In 10 years, there are:
120 months
520 Weeks
3,652 Days
87,658 Hours
5,259,487 Minutes
315,569,260 Seconds

3. Some gramatical errors too.
Seerss
2008-05-11 . chapter 1
... wow...
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