that was just the sweetest most cutest thing ever. that bit where zack was asleep holding baby riku was so damn cute! i had a goofy grin on my face the whole time i was reading this

Riku the mini-Seph. Funny.

How sweet!

Cute story. I like seeing Sephiroth the way he was before he lost his mind.

So Enkeli is another word from Hilargi's continent, huh? What does it mean? I've also been meaning to ask what Sydan means. It isn't Al Bhed, but is it some other language, or one you created yourself?

This was very 'adorable fluff'. I quite enjoyed your take on all of the characters used and the situation. It was a very nice story, even if I read it after the occasion.

aw...very sweet.keep it up.

-_-cute!-_-

I liked this a lot, you wrote it excellently and there was one or two little typos, but mainly it was good. I LOVED Seph and Hilargi and Zack, and even Ienzo, they were great!! This was really really nice.

Aww... that was so incrediably sweet! That's about how I would see the day going down. Baby Ku with finger paint is an awesome visual.

yay! I love Hilargi as a character ^^
She's my favorite OC I've seen so far.
And this was cute, though there were several typos, so I was wondering if maybe you had rushed to put this up in time?
Though, I'm in no position to be making accusations.
Cute story, and I liked Zack's role in it ^^