Wow - amazing!! I realise this is a very old fic (more than three years now!!), but I still thought I would drop you a line and let you know that I enjoyed it!!

Cate

Great story!!!! I really really liked it. You use an amazing writing technique. :) When I first read the title, I thought, "Is this a humorous one?" But I read then that it was angst, and I couldn't resist reading the story. Good job!!

~Lady M.

Hey, I like this. I don't read spoilers, so I don't know what the future holds for Asha, but I like the way you've gotten into her head. Very believable. And the image of Logan sitting there with shaving cream on his face doesn't hurt a bit either ;)

This was really cool!

I hate Asha I hope that you aren't implying an Asha-Logan thing uh uh I ain't even tryin to hear that

really powerful! I like this positive outlook on Asha's character. Keep it up

Oh wow. I was going to write something along these lines, but now that I've read yours, I don't think I'll bother... Wonderful characterisation. I feel the emotion.
Thank you for this wonderful fic.

Excellent story. You said that it isn't safe to portray a character that we just "met", which is usually true, but if it helps at all, this is exactly how I saw her too. Awesome story, you really captured the flavor of the characters.

ANGSTY!!!! I *loved* it!!!!

Rach, I've missed you so much. How do you do it? You manage to convey so much emotion with so few words. You made Asha more real and likeable in my eyes. Who couldn't help but fall for Logan? I love your writing style. Your talent always amazes me. As far as challenges go, you know you've never done a really sappy, mushy, romantic M/L fic, only teetered on the edge. I'd love to see your take on that subject! (hint,hint for us shippers out there). Please don't stay away so long......okay? Btw, I hope your still planning on finishing "Denouement". You know I luv ya!

nice way of looking at her and the whole situation. I actually like her in this story. And God Yes to the haircut! Can I just say eeeewwwwwwwwwwwww to his current hair!?

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I DON'T LIKE ASHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I do love your writing. You have an uncany ability to take a simple mundane act and bring so much meaning to it. The haircut and the words fit perfectly together "There is no need to mourn any more.". And Logan's fascination with the thin red line on his finger was as intense for me as it was for Asha. Logan's longing for Max is so evident throughout. And again Asha understands exactly what is goining on. 'His eyes were on somewhere behind her, never on her.' Yet Asha has an admirable determination. Her ability to create uncertainty in the end was a victory for her. Amazing work.

Oooh! I like Asha in this fic. She tries, but doesn't push. I think that's pretty accurate.

I haven't seen your name attached to any fic lately, so I was extra-excited to see this fic. It's a truly charming ficlet that I very much enjoyed. It tied together well, and it fit with what we know or can imagine about Asha thus far. The only little confusion I had was with the pronoun 'she'... it wasn't always clear (to me) if you were referring to Asha or Max, but I couldn't decide whether that was an intentional ambiguity. A pleasure to read your work, as always.