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| DarthKyuubi 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abusesounds cool. maybe shinji should get an armor upgrade, sort of a cross between the Eva and the iron man suit. the size of the iron man, but with the color scheme, strenght and attributes of the eva. but if it's gonna fight angels it should have the flight capabilities and weapons of the iron man suit. and an arc reactor, much more powerfull than the original of course, or else it wouldnt evan make a dent in the angels. |
| RayRayOtega 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is the kind of story that I really want to read, so please continue with it. And Have seen the Iron Man movie? I have, and it blew my mind. |
| Enforcer7 2008-05-21 ch 1, | abuseAmazing, a couple spelling mistakes but Amazing, Please get the Next chapter out ASAP! |
| RyoTheSaiyan 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseI knew an Iron Man/ Evangelion crossover was going to come up. lol Great idea. Hope to see more later |
| Dookie Overlord 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abuseNice work, Gendo is gonna be so **! |
| SithKnight-Galen 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseHeh, very interesting twist on the story there. I was wondering what you were going to do, and I must say, your concept has me intrigued. |
| Toasterman 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseI really like this so far. I just saw the Ironman movie, didn't really read any comics or anything but really liked the Tony Stark character. Plus, I think he'd be one of the coolest guys Shinji could have for a father. I don't care to much for Gendo Ikari. Update soon, I like it. |
| SSJ4Sora 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abusecool |
| Rose1948 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseVery Nice! |
| Ant Crown 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseI forsee Tony telling Rhodes to give the ole Reachambeau (A kick to the Manly Jewels) to Gendo. |
| straightedgebigevil 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseYou saw the movie did'nt you? i ain't seen it yet but I know like this story I'm gonna like it |
| Bookstick 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abusePlease keep writing! I have to see just what happens when Tony finally gets to be a Dad. The press would go nuts(as well as a certain NERV commander) and it would be a good thing to have Shinji in a semi-normal living enviroment. |
| acepro Evolution 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseNot bad, not bad! I definetly like what you wrote so far. I always imagined that a fan fiction crossover would come out between Eva and Iron Man, I guess it has something to do with the Iron Man suit when compared with the Evangelion armor. They do look like they could be merged don't they? In any case well done and please continue, and remember - - WICKET UN TUSH ON LEG!? |
| fanfreak 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abusenice, i just saw the iron man film it was awsome, i like this story it has a good plot and i havent seen any noticed any grammar errors, but hey i usally need spell check for most things...i did notice that there is no pairing, is that for now or have you already planed out the whole thing? this is a good start to something great. but hey you knew that, anyway update soon an all that good stuff. Signed: The Fanfreak |
| Neferius 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseAll I have to say is that reading the beginning of this made me want to re-read your original version. Alas, poor Fuyutsuki wasn't the one to score with Yui. Of course you could only do so much with that old man. Tony Stark on the other hand, lot's of possibilities there. Heck, I'm still trying to get over the fact that they gave the role of a hero in a movie to a man that is far from a role model. Oh well. Not a bad start, but not too much I hadn't seen before from you. The next chapter will be the hook, it usually is with this kind of story. Read ya Later. |