Things I liked:
I like the second line XD
Good character interactions
LMAO, that's incredibly sexist

Ways to improve:
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~Myst
Things that I didn't like:
You make them act younger than their age in the classroom

Myst-chan note:
This is going to be my last chapter for today but I did enjoy reading it

Things I liked:
I like Kyo's reaction to Yuki looking at him but it just seems too friendly for them
Lol, I really liked Momiji's and Kimi's interaction XD
Great part at the end

Ways to improve:
Spacing error: "afterschool"

~Myst

Things I liked:
Like the character interactions
Characterisation is better in this chapter
Lol, it's fun how Manabe starts writing a story about himself

Ways to improve:
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~Myst
Things that I didn't like:
The story doesn't seem to have any breaks or changes in it which seems unusual to me

Things I liked:
Yay, great interaction between Aya and Kaki-kun

Ways to improve:
Work on characterisation a little
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~Myst
Things that I didn't like:
You don't need to put the Sohma in front of Haru-kun and Momiji-kun's names if listing them under "The teen Sohmas"
I'm surprised that all these people are together
You know some people, like myself, actually are depressed, it's not actually made up because we think we're the only people in the world who have it tough. It's to do with brain chemistry and so what if I have to take mood stabalizers because I have bipolar personality disorder and most of my work is under angst. It's a part of life you know...

Sorry that I'm venting I just...hate people who don't consider that there are others out there who aren't psychologically healthy.

Guess 'sigh' I'll read on >.>...since I feel I have to

Starting again:
Things I liked:
I like the Mabudachi interaction, poor Ha'ri though
I like the insert of the "individual" writing
Cute bonus

~Myst

Sounds fun, looking forward to reading it
~Myst

Good story. I like the second pervert story more than the first one. Shigure telling the first one really suits his character.
I vote for quake for the next chapter.

This is awsome!Can't wait to read the next chapter!^^
Manabe's story was hilarious!XD

Very funny! I vote for quake.

poor kyo, always being abused though he was asking for it. i'm so glad you didn't discontinue this one!

Shigure is really perverted.
i choose Quintuplets for the next chapter.
thanx for updating.
please update it soon ^_^!

Quintuplets, I never heard this one before.

Quintuplets! hey, I learned something new! I never knew that word!

quintuplets plz!
o! can r be rape?
~AliaraGen

Quintuplets ...

quints please