 Luna C. Starque 2008-05-13 . chapter 1Not bad... I feel like it was a bit out of character, that Kyle and Stan's roles should have switched around, but maybe that's just my interpretation of the characters. I liked Stan's little emo poem. The one about being alone. Sounds like something I would have written last year. :) I did like the ending, though. It was cute. Very cute and cuddly. Nice job. |
 crazydbzfan87 2008-05-12 . chapter 1It's good. I really liked it, especally the poem (the end of it most of all), it relates to how I feel about someone...someone who's sitting right next to me, in fact...very well written, I applaude you! ^_^ |