great story! very interesting idea and it's fun to see more hunters! thanks for sharing

I'd love to be your beta! King is so sexy and you write him so well, it would be an honor for me to look over your story. You can either search for me in the beta readers section or e-mail me at . Up to you if you want to use me, but I'm really excited about your story.

I really like this story so far, you should continue. You are a pretty good writer and i'd like to see where you take this...also, get poor Elle out of the car, poor kitten is having panic attacks! Love it, please keep going.

Andrew's Slinky

ed it! Keep it going! Can't wait for more!

rofl. Hilarious! I cant believe they forgot her! she shoul've punched him too just for fun.

New chapter soon?

N get rid of the TYPOS. {

Oh ur going much faster than I am.

Again w the typos.

N r they ever getting Elle out of the car? Poor thing is having panic pains in there. lol

Ooh, me like's this fic. }

U know I killed off a Rae in my fic, lol but I'm liking these new NS. They sound cool.

By the way u got some typo's better do a read through after ur done to catch them. it helps me when i print them out, somehow its easier to c the mistakes.