Ouch. Didn't think Blue would ever go THAT far. But that's really powerful. Good perspective on Blue's life. A lot of people have said he had a bad family life, but it explains a lot of his actions. And this takes the prize as one of the best fics I've read. Can you continue this?

*shudder* Ouch. Interesting progression. I wonder why the Venusaur didn't obey him...

umm, dark, but i like it. I hoped it was longer...

I loved it. Green (or Blue) is my favourite character, and I absolutely love angsty fics with him in it >:D good work.

Seeing as this is the first pokemon special (adventures) fanfic that I've ever seen on ff.net, I shall try and not squeal... okay... failed! *squeals loudly* Oh, Green angst (please don't mind me, I use the japanese names - Blue is Green and Green is Blue - something about them changing names since Red and Blue came out here... erm, sorry, I'm babbling ^^)... Yay! I liked this. It was short and to the point and I really suck when it comes to feedback but I liked this! How do you feel about being archived? ^_^;; I have a site for pokemon special and... *grin* Anywy, angst angst angst! Angst. ^_^

just a little wrong if you ask me, i don't think this is a realistic fic. but the emotion does show throught rating: 8/10