I simply adore your work, and would be more than happy to buy your book! I can't wait to find out what kind of fantasy literature it will be Don't give up and belive in talents!

- Love your work! 3

Great story! I loved it So So So much :D

i have a question, when you said research in chapter 8 did you mean research or "research"

tsk. i can't believe shikamaru died. he is one of my favorites.

ouch.

well, at last Oro-teme is dead. i get so annoyed every time i read a story with orichimaru being alive until the end.

so what's gonna happen with the biju sealed in Gaara?

Amazing story. I really enjoyed every each moment of reading it :)

Naruto may be considered really op at the end, but it seems only logical. You're not afraid of killing characters so if you decided to save most of Konoha population, I'm glad for your decision

If I have to criticize something, then it will probably too much mature Naruto and even Hinata immediately after their date, but this is long way in the past and easily forgiven :-D

Really great job and I thank you for it :)

aww.. i feel slightly conflicted. is Gaara really dead? i liked him even during the Chunin exams when he was still crazy in the anime. ;( oh well, moving on...

Jesus, that was an amazing story. One of the best i have ever read, and the best completed Naruto fanfiction ever.

Awesome story! Nothing else can be said. Thank you for the good ending... Ahh, to hell with it, your awesome in completing this. Thanks!

Awesome awesome awesome! Beautifully crafted and with a great heart warming ending! I think I speak for a lot of people by saying that many people enjoy reading fanfiction for the happy endings and 'cool' possibilities. A lot of those would make horrible writing in terms of plot and character balance, but people read fanfic to see their favorite characters have a happily ever after. Classic and other published literature is there for more 'quality' writing, though I feel that the quality of your story is pretty high too!

ok story first starting out it was eh and as i read it made more since and got better the end though seemed a bit rushed to me but it was still really good you just made my favorite authors list and i look forward to more of your work

ha ha ha ha the end of the story's the best
In his hand Itachi held a single bell.

"Aw crap," Naruto said.
i was laughing my ass of at that

ok now i see why you killed lee and gaara you made it into a (real) ninja life apart from the cartoon.
no sunshine and rainbows and its growing on me at first it was eh? now its ok im good