Hi, Peep. This isn't a review; it's a note to let you know I'm having trouble with my e-mail. I received all your notes tonight, but I can't send anything out. I've contacted my ISP, and they've identified the problem, but it's going to take them a day or two to fix it. But here are the answers to your notes:
1. Yes. Christ works better than Mark.
2. Asking Diana if she has kids is perfect.
3. If you ever show up in SC, I'll have to make you a lasagne! ;D

At least I can still receive mail, so if Ch. 3 pt 2 is ready, go ahead and send it.
-Jake

i loved loved loved loved (this could go on 4eva) this story please write more
btw i have a new story and will be taking request for any story so check it out its called more than expected

Very well written. The storyline was great & kept my interest. Keep up the good work.

Great story, alittle bit too short, but still. Good job!

Another great Chapter Peeper. I hope that you will post the next one soon.

Great Chapter Peeper. I hope that you will be posting the next chapter soon.

Another great chapter Peeper. It is really getting good...

Great chapter, can't wait to read the next one, keep up the good work..I feel bad for Jeffrey, but he's gotta do what he's gotta do to get Bogg well.

Another great chapter of your remake Peeper. Can't wait for the next chapter

Great so far.Please keep going!

This is great so far Peeper. I like this new rendition of The Plague.

uh oh...poor Bogg. Poor Jeffrey, but it's nice for a change that Bogg is the one in trouble and Jeffrey has to save him. Can't wait for the next chapter. Great job Peep!

a bit short, but well done.
Rain