Reviews for When Love Must Die

Reviews For: When Love Must Die

MysticDiamond 2008-07-14 ch 4,	abuseAh, you really are a nasty one - bringing Rathbone at this moment. I like the idea quite well...if Khash managed to break free from the Seven Seas, so does he have to... but anyway, I'm so looking forward to the promised KQ/Khash scene - he's just coping in a fantastic way. Gosh, you just have to love him ;) Please, please, keep on writing - I can only tell you all over again ;) Love Diamond
MysticDiamond 2008-07-10 ch 3,	abuseAh, that's loads better - you brought her back! I also think that KQ has a human side - and the human side you gave her in this chapter is exactly what I had in mind. Do I have to say anything else? ;) Yeah, please, please do not let us wait to long for the next chapter - I'm addicted to the story, as I already told you ;) Love Diamond P.S.: and I'm also a great fan of KQ/Khash - so both thumbs up for that ;)
Bomba-Fae 2008-07-04 ch 3,	abuseI thought she was more in character in this chapter for sure. Now I really want you to update, its really gotten interesting for me. I really want to know who the person behind her is. Or if she really is loosing her mind :P Update soon, Smiles, Bomba
0Verdigris0 2008-07-04 ch 3,	abuse-gasp- E! DUDE! AS YOUR BETA THAT WAS EVIL! Surprisin' me :P BUT KHASHOGGI'SBACK! WO! 10/10
MysticDiamond 2008-07-04 ch 2,	abuseSo, first things first: I really like the way you write. I know, I've already told you before, but it's the truth ;) You really have the right touch at chosing the words. Describing emotions is one of your best talents - it's truly amazing how you lay the feelings of the characters open, without exploiting them. But this time I also have to bring something negative forward: For me, KQ was way too much out of character. I know, she's a human being but somehow I couldn't imagine her in the scene with Scaramouche, better to say in the scene after she left Scaramouche... I really like how you brought Khash back and he acted in a perfect way. Well, I'm hoping for another chapter, because I'm addicted to your style ;) Love Diamond
East Coast Ryder 2008-06-24 ch 2,	abuseOh. My. God. I love this fic. :p It's nice to see KQ's perspective once in a while, and you've got it down pretty well.
Bomba-Fae 2008-06-15 ch 2,	abuseOh My. Killer Queen has a little smidgen of a heart? Who would of thought. I LOVE your characterization here. I'm ** that you killed Gaz though. I really hope you update this soon, your style of writing is awesome. It really keeps me intrigued. Smiles, Bomba
CrimsonSuspense 2008-06-15 ch 1,	abuseThat's completely amazing. You made KQ human. Um, WOW. More, please? When you posted the first chapter, I was like, oh, that's a good fic. Now, it's just fabulous. Ok, I probably sound completely insane here, but I am, and that's old news. MORE! 10/10. etc. CrimsonSuspense the Insane x
MysticDiamond 2008-06-10 ch 1,	abuseYou're absolutely right: there are rarely Fics with KQ to be seen around here. And so I'm really, really thankful for yours :) You did such a great job! I love the way you describe - her feelings, her moves, her actions. You always manage to arrange the right moods, e.g. when KQ's losing her temper, you can feel how angry she ist or when she realises he betrayed her, you just have to feel her sadness - you just can't help it :) Great job - keep on writing, please :) (and maybe there will be one with Khashoggi, too...? ;) )
CrayolaxSmiles 2008-05-18 ch 1,	abuseOoh...poor Killer Queen...man. I never thought I'd feel sorry for her! I think you did a lovely job! I like it. =] x
Bomba-Fae 2008-05-12 ch 1,	abuseYou never do see many Killer Queen fics so I was surprised when this popped up. She had never been one of my favourite characters but I really liked your take on her. It was written well and I found it very entertaining. Good job. Smiles, Bomba
stagedoxy 2008-05-12 ch 1,	abuseI think it was excellent...I decided to read it cause I'm bored but I actually really enjoyed it! Good work! I'd love to read more! xox

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