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wjobsessed
2008-05-29
ch 1,
abuse"I miss being able to laugh over silly stuff. I miss having fun at work with you." I miss this terribly, too.

Hey, A. Boleyn-nice to have you back! This is very smooth. Thanks. Don't give up the ship...you never know, the DL chemistry may flare up again in a few months... :)
webdlfan
2008-05-23
ch 1,
abuseI love it! Great story ... and I'm glad you couldn't give up. :p
ameriker
2008-05-15
ch 1,
abuseGREAT story! I loved this and would love to see it on the show! :D
Marianne H. Stillie
2008-05-14
ch 1,
abuseThis is a beautifully written story. It's exactly what I imagine happened after the phone call. The conversation between them is perfect.
prplerayne
2008-05-14
ch 1,
abuseE! BOBO!! You're back!! *bounces and claps happily* I knew you couldn't stay away for too long!! I'm so happy! I love your writing! It's so touching and every word is placed just right, to reveal a vivid imagery that kept me very engaged! I could see this playing out on screen with very little effort on my part!
serenity2bliss
2008-05-14
ch 1,
abuseOMG, I cannot believe it when i read in your AN that you're thinking on giving up the fandom! You can't! I need you in it! You're one of the reason why i still hv some hope in the ship, believe it or not =(
I tend to freak out when good DL writers are giving up the ship because that will leave me wif nothing good to read and also the backbone of the fandom.

Enuff about that and on wif the review.

I think truer words have never been spoken till now : It's too late to fix it.What they need is a fresh start. I never think of it that way till now because i'm so into the whole 'how can they fix it?' mode. You're right. They can't. All they can do now is to learn from it, put it behind them,move on, and start all over again.
CarolinaH.Manning
2008-05-13
ch 1,
abusefirstly, I love that quote

and I love love love the story. its so genuine and emotional and real and I want it to happen on the show.
monique44
2008-05-13
ch 1,
abuseI love this so far. This is an amazing and tenderhearted story. Keep up the great work.
KTmac09
2008-05-12
ch 1,
abuseWow! This was very, very well-written, I enjoyed every bit of it. Your words were so poignant, so heartfelt. I could literally feel the emotion come right out of my screen, odd as that may sound.

I thought the best part about your story was how well it flowed along with the recent episode. I hope 419 is, in fact, a TBC episode, with this becoming the scene that transpires immediately after Lindsay's rain walk.
Spontaneity
2008-05-12
ch 1,
abuseWe all sure hope so.
katydid13
2008-05-12
ch 1,
abusePerfect!
Michaela Martin
2008-05-12
ch 1,
abuseI think you have adopted the notion that he's never, ever, until he's dying going to tell her about Rikki. Which in Danny's case may be a very god thing. Gr-eat job! I love everything you have written.
TBD
2008-05-12
ch 1,
abuseGreat to see you back Bo, even if its just to clear your head. Great reasoning and recap of their relationship and all that they've been through. I can't believe that this is the end for them and I hope that, like in your story, they have a new beginning.
Mystik225
2008-05-12
ch 1,
abuseLoved it. If they were to play it out on the show, this is exactly how I would want it to happen.
EmpireClover
2008-05-12
ch 1,
abuseI am so glad you didn't leave the fandom. I love your writing, and although the NY writers, obviously, shouldn't have had Danny be quite so heartless, I did think that the angst produced very good fics, to try and sort out the mess which was created, yours included.
The writing was beautiful, and the emotion you have written through little gestures, and words, is incredibly powerful to the reader.
I really like how you used pathetic fallacy, to mirror Danny and Lindsay. And the line: "Exactly. The rain stopped." Is a perfect example of how something so small can impact and influence so much.
I also feel that while Lindsay is in his apartment, it is kind of just their 'world', no outside influences, just them to discuss and sort. The rain outside seems harsh and cold (Maybe representing their problems), yet inside it is warm, dark and cosy, this may be the catalyst which helped them 'talk', as it couldn't be done in the lab, which isn't so appealing.
Beautifully written, I hope you continue writing in the future. Brilliant.
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