It's a great story so far...but why Tom?? WHY?!

Hi, I mean no disrespect when I say this but that chapter was way freaky. But you pull it of because some people when they write in this way makes them sound plain psycotic but as I said you pull it off by managing to sound sane when writing this. The only thing I have to say to all you people who read the reviews like me, not all Annabels are whores.
Good job!
Infinate hugs and kisses
P.S. Im sorry if this makes no sense but I'm writing this from my phone on the way to school and I'm nearly there so I can't check it, which means spell check will have done the honors. X.

:I you... you KILLED TOM?! OMG TOM! save him please!! omg please hurry and update!! ah!!

OMG!! That was brilliant!
Can not wait for the next couple of chapters!!
Well Done! x

its so awsumm..

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why does it say chapter 2 at the top??

How could you kill Tom?
Great Update!
Update soon!

oh my god...
U R SO EVIL...
OMG..IM CRYING...
OMG..THATS SO SAD..!!

BTW..LOVING UR STORY ITS FRIGGEN AWSUMM WRITE MORE RLY SOON PLzZ..

EVIL!

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you killed off tom! how could you??! ahh crap damn it! damn it damn it damn it why did i ever start reading this chapter??! (good chapter by the way) now i'm freaking out and people are looking at me strangely and and and no! not tom!
stupid killing off my favourite character and argh! damn it!
(i did like this chapter... more please?)

ah poor tom!
Lies.

sob sniffle sniffle...TOM R.I.P...poor tom...you evil evil prattish prick. lol, yeah, i think your story is absolutly fantastic besides the demsise of tom...sniff...update soon!1

*crys* lol Tom was always my favorite!lol but still can't wait for an update though...poor tom ! alex is gonna have like a freaking melt down

Thank you! Finally someone had the guts to kill Tom! I don't like it but I'm not brave enough to kill him aha!I'm such a wimp! Great story and please please update soon!

This is actually quite good. Little freaky, but good.

i love this story, please update soon, i can't wait to hear what happens next.

That was pretty amazing. You really have spun an original tale here. I thotoughly enjoyed reading it.

Hope you update.