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debbiets
2008-05-23
ch 13,
abuseSorry I haven't reviewed this for a while but just wanted to say I thoroughly enjoyed your story, and am looking forward to the sequel.
firebunee
2008-05-22
ch 13,
abuseYeah, a sequal! Thanks for all your hard work and we love it!
Have a great weekend, We will have a great Memorial Day Weekend just Due South of you:-)
andaere
2008-05-22
ch 13,
abuseAwh. I just love this story. It's got Tommy angst and Tommy torture but he doesn't die so it's great and I'm not making any sense because I'm listening to Michael Johns from American Idol (I don't care if you've never heard of that show or hates it, I love it) singing "We Will Rock You / We Are The Champions" ah luv him. ;) Love those songs too...

We are the champions, we are the champions, no time for losers, 'cause we are the champions... of the world!

;)

Sorry. Listening to music makes me write crappy reviews. -turns off music-

Okay. I just love your endings. It's amazing that you can write good endings, ones that I actually like. ;) I find it very hard to write endings and even harder to read them. Anyway, I love all your Tom/Doug interactions and Tom/Booker, and I like that you don't have them gay... I mean, if you do another story and you do Tom/Doug slash later, that's fine, I love Tom/Doug, but it can get a bit cliche, if you know what I mean. I'm totally rambling.

So, I'm just gonna say: congratulations! It's truly amazing that you can write a story and finish it in the span of... a very short time. And a GOOD story too. I'm very excited to learn that you'll be writing a sequel and I'll be eagerly awaiting your next story! =) Luv ya!
procol harum
2008-05-22
ch 13,
abuseAw nice ending =) I love your interactions between Tom and Doug because they're so Tom and Doug-like =) And yay, I'll be looking forward to a sequel :D
Dizzles the Dizzy
2008-05-22
ch 13,
abuseAh, how sweet! I especially love the ending where Doug appologizes and Tom is all 'No problem!" -- hehehe, I can't wait for the sequel and thanks for mentioning me. I hope to read more from you.

ta,

Dizzles the Dizzy
Dizzles the Dizzy
2008-05-22
ch 12,
abuseAwe! CUTE!
Sorry,that's the first thing that came to mind.
firebunee
2008-05-22
ch 12,
abuseYEAH! Bring on the Cheers, TOM's AWAKE!
procol harum
2008-05-21
ch 12,
abuseGreat chapter, I loved how supportive Doug was and when trying to coax Tom out of the coma. And it worked =)
andaere
2008-05-21
ch 11,
abuseAww...

This is really touching and believable. It's got me all teary-eyed. And although having Tom in a coma isn't exactly an original idea, you actually write in Tom's POV while he's in a coma, which I've never seen done before, and you manage to make it fresh and orginal. =) Good job!

TOM BETTER WAKE UP!
Dizzles the Dizzy
2008-05-21
ch 11,
abuseOkay. I hope TOm can get his act together soon so that DOug doesn't start crying.

Yes, sequel!
procol harum
2008-05-21
ch 11,
abuseGreat chapter, although a bit freaky with Tom's thoughts near the end(and how his eyes are opened). Hope you add more soon =)
procol harum
2008-05-21
ch 10,
abuseaww that was a good chapter, and really great filler. But poor Doug, and poor Tom. And Tom had better wake up soon =)
Dizzles the Dizzy
2008-05-21
ch 10,
abuseYOu just gave me an idea you could do as a sequel to this fan fic. You finish this one up the way you planned and the next one could be another dangerous mission and Doug goes Postal with the whole Protection thing.

I liked this by the way. It's an interesting character Sketch into Dougie. I can't wait for the next one.

ta,

DIZZY
Hanson's Angel
2008-05-21
ch 9,
abuseWow, I feel like I'm so behind here. . .last time I read I was on chapter 4, things are just going along, la-dee-da, then, all hell breaks loose in chaps 8 & 9. . .nicely done, tewksgirl, you've got it all in there -- loved it. I *know* you'd never kill Hanson off (would you? LOL), but the thought of him not making it is still nice. . .well, not "nice" but you know what I mean. . .nice in that we get to be distraught about how bad off he is. . .all right, carry on -- it's been a great ride so far. . .
Dizzles the Dizzy
2008-05-20
ch 9,
abuseAh, I hope he doesn't die. I don't know. I guess the next chapter you could say "and then Tommy died...the end!"

THough, we'd have to kill you if he did...but I don't think so.

ANyway, thanks for the update! I loved it.
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