I love the story. I hope you write more.

Please continue with this story! I just love Stan and Epros fighting over Ari. CH.3 full bloom was cute and I got to read about a drunk Ari! I also like your sister's story, but I couldn't review it because I don't have an account. :(
Can you please tell her I like her story too. I can't wait for your next chapter! Bye!

Chapters 3 and 4 were pretty good reads, though I think the pacing is getting a bit too fast. It's like a major milestone between the three happens every chapter. Romantic relationships (or any relationships built on trust) take time to develop. I think if you slow down a bit more, you can get so much more out of the story. :)

Maybe you should ignore the user who's harassing you? Responding to them gives them a reason to attack you again. If they're flaming you under an 'Anonymous' name, then they don't really have the confidence to tell you what they think 'to your face', so to speak. They're afraid of being replied back to. It's always easier to insult someone when they don't know who you are. I also find it very funny how they're bringing religion into a fanfiction based on a game with Evil Kings in it lol.

Hehe, this story is very cute and well written. Is somewhat a bit similar to most Epros,Stan and Ari Fanfics but I like reading does so is all good~ I hope u continue it is going well so far!

I can believe that Stan and Epros are gay but not Ari.There just seems like a big age gape between pairings like Ari/Marlene 16/300?or Ari/Stan 16/300 or Ari/Epros 16/maybe200 or something I just imagine he's pretty old for some reason Ari/Linda 16/17or 100 I don't know she looks 17 but as far as demons go shes probably older but Ari/Rosalyn 16/22 isn't that big an age differance plus shes my favorite besides Ari shes pretty, her parasols cool, and I wish I had a forehead belt.I also thought it was funny when she slapped Kisling and that clerk who acted like a jackass.So I always end up pairing my Ari with Rosalyn.I think it would be funny if Rosalyn showed up and Ari confessed to having the hots for her and then Ari and Rosalyn could be together plus everyone would find out Epros and Stan are gay and Linda could accuse Epros of being with Stan because they did SLEEP together.(plus Ari has photos tee hee).Then they could deny it but later end up liking each other.That would be sweet.I'd hope Ari could still be friends with them.I hope you not upset with my idea and will at least have a think on using it if nothing else than as an alternate ending to the story pretty,pretty please with extra cheese it would be awesome and forever earn you a place in my fangirl (heart).

I Love Epros and Ari as friends,but in a relationship I just don't know.Plus they seemed to be really out of character in this.Epros is more dignified then that and he never seemed fat to me.Stan's not as menacing and arrogant as he could be.Plus whats with all the blushing it was kinda cute but not really as in character as it could be.Where did Ari get a camera I didn't think they had that kind of technoligy.Linda seemed in character though I love her too shes cute and silly.Wheres Marlene I thought she would be in this since she was supposedly dating Ari at the end of the game.And is Rosalyn going to show up and ruin Stan's plan.Nice try on this story its okay but you just need to keep them more in character other than that its funny.

HEY SIS!

I love your story and I'm not being baised because you're my little sis. Even though I corrected it for you I really like the way you wrote it~ Stan is so mean but he's cute

So far, this is very good. The rivalry between Stan and Epros seems pretty intense. I really hope that you'll continue this, since it seems that alot of stories in this fandom end up getting dropped midway. I'm really look forward to the next chapter!