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tfobmv18
2008-08-18
ch 36,
abuseI love it. I hope you work out things with your plot bunnies. This is a really good story. Can't wait to see what'll happen next. Keep up the good work.
ChamberlinofMusic
2008-07-28
ch 36,
abuseHey! I am sorry that you won't be here to update further but understand that you want to take your time and with your story. I appreciate your consideration for making a great fic! I just hope to see you return to it soon, and will be looking for other pieces that you do put out!
Kairan1979
2008-07-26
ch 36,
abuseTake a break. I'm writing myself, so I completely understand you.
I can wait.

If you need a suggestion - I'd like to see why the X-Men paired students like this. Especially Hellion/X-23 as a two-member team.
Crack4sure
2008-07-25
ch 36,
abuseaw well, good luck!! Can't wait for a new chapter soon!
Theirs
2008-07-24
ch 36,
abuseWell I never review, this will be my third time. I love your story, I keep going through Ishandahalfs favorites to get to yours, but now your going on hiatus, so, I had to add your story to my favorites for myself and ad you to my author alert. I love the story, its well written, I can tell you actually think before you write and its a good romy because there not just hey I like you, I can suddenly touch, short story. So long story short, its a great story and I can't wait to hear when its updated again :)
Lucky's Girl
2008-07-24
ch 36,
abuseHi,
I tottaly understand putting the story on hold. The plot was getting crazy, good, but crazy. If it is crazy for the reader your head must be spinning. I'm glad your waiting instead of making the ending suck. As a new author I kind of understand the craziness that goes into making a story on Fan Fiction and I have a simple story. Thanks for all the hard work you've put into Asylum so far, and you don't have to worry the second Asylum is up you'll be hearing from me. Thanks.
-Paige
ishandahalf
2008-07-24
ch 36,
abuseoh... while i'm disappointed that you'll be taking a bit of a hiatus, i'm sure a rest is well-deserved - after all, you've really been churning out the chapters! best of luck wrangling the plot bunnies into submission, and rest assured that i'll be waiting with baited breath until you're updating again. until then, maybe i'll just have to reread the entire thing again and again and again... ;)
PyroWhore
2008-07-24
ch 36,
abuseAww, I love this story BUT we all need a break and you take as long as you need. I'll be a faithful reader when you decide to pick this up again =) And thanks for the "special thanks" it's been fun reading and reviewing. You're an amazing writer.
MisfitGirl13
2008-07-23
ch 36,
abuselol. Take the break and dont worry. I'll still be here when it continues. And it;ll make updates that much better ;-)
Lucky's Girl
2008-07-22
ch 35,
abuseHi,
The plot thickens! I liked how you almost gave up whats going on and then left us hanging.I of course loved the interaction between Rogue and Remy. Their first date as far as I'm concerned and yah Remy knows Rogue broke up with Bobby! Everyone is suspicious. Not just me the characters too. I like how you make the reader feel like there in the same position of not understanding whats going on. You rock. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks
-Paige
Lucky's Girl
2008-07-22
ch 34,
abuseHi,
Again love seeing more of Laura socialize with others but keep her vague apperance. Seeing more hints arise throughout the story. It is so much fun trying to guess. As a wolverine fan I love seeing the interaction between Laura and Logan. His bussiness is very suspicious (more hints yah you). Seeing how Remy's pyshic is more pushy then even Logans is very intriging. I wonder if Rogue will have time for another session with Emma.
Finally Rogue and Remy are talking again. The hints again are so much fun but the suspense is killing me. Thanks
-Paige
Lucky's Girl
2008-07-22
ch 33,
abuseHi,
I like the relationship forming between Jillian and Laura. Not Romantic of course but sort of trusting kind of. Kitty is really becoming a strong friend in Rogue's life. She is very understanding and supporting which is what Rogue needs. Oh no, your making me nervous a cliffhanger and a big one. The theories are racing threw my brain. It takes a great author who can throw great twists in to do that. Thanks for doing so much for the story and the fans. Thanks
-Paige
Lucky's Girl
2008-07-22
ch 32,
abuseHey,
I should have seen this coming, but as long as the spandex goes it doesn't matter. It will be fun seeing her with a new team. Who Bobby is gone. I would have made her way angrier but I guess she had already cooled down. Go Kitty making rogue go through with it I love seeing Kitty's firey side. I always have so much to say but forget by the time I write the review. Anyways as always the chapter rocks, you rocks. I'm going to read the next chapter now! Thanks.
-Paige
P.S sorry it is so long, I think long is good but my english teacher's don't.
Lucky's Girl
2008-07-22
ch 31,
abuseHi,
Gumbo, Gumbo ha ha ha.I loved that nickname I Can't believe how funny that is I still can't stop laughing! I was shocked that even Logan can see she so needs to get with Remy. The part with lorna was good. I'm glad she realizes the situation. Rogue of course is struggaling with Remy's concious.

Yah! Rogue is an x-men.!Yah
Now what about Remy? Thanks for such a great chapter.
-Paige
Lucky's Girl
2008-07-22
ch 30,
abuseHi,
That was great. It was the perfect amount of everyone's thoughts and emotions. I loved Rogue's emotions thinking she's betraying Remy and finally she realizes what a jerk Bobby is. Hallauh. I hope she sorts things out with Remy. I loved Laura realizing that she is really mad at herself though it makes me sad. Thanks again for the great chapter.
-Paige
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