Wow... you dreamed that? O_o

Ha ha ha! these stories sre hilarious!! wish i had POTO dreams like that...should build on these ideas to make them richer and more layered, like a real story. Lmao, that was funny...

"She is bedecked in a rather standard pair of elaborately embroidered jeans, an alarmingly pink blouse with belled sleeves, big, ugly, fashionable earrings, with magenta feathers in her hair."

WOW! I love that description, not because I'm pro-Raven or anti-Raven or anything... just because it's an amazing description.

And I love that you used the word "ardent" and made it sound natural. I'm quite impressed. (...and amused... but you intended that, right?)

Hysterical.

My only correction is "to heartily diembowel my beloved and I..." This is actually one of the rare instances in which "me" would have been correct. It is because one says "to disembowel me" therefore one says "to disembowel my beloved and me." One must use "I" when it's a subject as in "Erik and I were crouched at the top of the stairs." It's because you say "I was crouched..." so you have to say "Erik and I were crouched" because "Me was crouched" sounds so dumb.

All those years of English teachers telling you not to say "Me and my friend..." has taken it's toll, and you fell into using "I" when "me" was right.

(But that's a minor little thing... and if I'd never been an English teacher, i wouldn't have noticed it.)

In the meantime, I DO wonder what you might do with the pixie now that Erik has caught it.

Gah!! I admit you WARNED us they were more than a bit bizarre, but... a broken Erik? Oh dear. Honestly, I LOVED the bit about the winter snow... I mean... because at the beginning when it rapidly changed from spring to summer I thought you were just being funny... I love the way it was tied together at the end. But poor Erik!!

Bwhaha.
Oh how these amuse me so. XD I loved how Erik was more interested in the pixie. Quite hilarious.
I hope you have more dreams like this in the future. (:

.heart.angel.

Wow, these are hilarious! It blows my vampire Erik dream off the shelves! Yeah, mine was KINDA messed up but your first one is just CRAZY! I love it! Keep on dreamin'!

Damn talk about strange! I like it and you're writing is great, I look forward to your next update.

>.< Not a fake Erik! That's really saddening! The trapped under a horse one pretty funny.

These are real dreams? Wow, lucky. I've only had one dream with Erik in it, and I hardly rememeber it.

I think that the fake guy that chased you in the dream was Raul maybe.

okay then...you have interesting dreams...

So I'm not crazy..as for having strange dreams of POTO. Hurray for that. ;)
I would like to congratulate you on this, and I hope to read more! ^^ At first, I will admit, I was a little scared on what this would bring..but you've written it so nice, that it just..flows? Hm, I cannot think of a better word. It doesn't make sense, but the way you've told it..does. :S Confusing much?
Anyways, what I'm getting at is that I liked it, and brought some laughs. (The seasons had me. ;D)
Look foreward to more.
.heart.angel.

that was hilarious! very wierd, but dreams always are. i wanna have an erik related dream lol.