A one-shot? I think you should definitely continue it.

VERY well in character.

It's nice to see interaction between Koizumi and Nagato. I usually ship ItsukixMikuru, but this fic may change that.

I saw no grammar or spelling errors either. I'll be checking this for updates! XD

Cute! Please write more chapters with a lot of Yuki/Koizumi fluff!

Wow I loved this!

Ah I'm so far interested. huhuhu. I hope you add more to this! Poor Kyon getting beat up like that. I want to see what happens

This is hardly a one shot xD

This could be an unfinished two shot or whatever.

Just update soon. _