Reviews for Hearts of Heroes

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Black Scepter 2008-07-17 ch 4,	abuseOk, it took me awile to review but anyway. I liked the story, though I can't wait tell Sokka go's into a game world.
thebladeofchaos 2008-07-16 ch 4,	abusethis is good so far, a few grammer mistakes but nothing too catstrophicm can't wait to see the worlds and allies
Shelby the Hedgehog 2008-07-16 ch 4,	abuseOnly one of the evil loser I could figure out was Eggman, the others I'm not so sure. Still very cool though.
pride1289 2008-07-16 ch 4,	abuseWhat's a secret villian? If it's Count Bleck, YAY! Or is it like Riku??
NUTCASE71733 2008-07-15 ch 4,	abuseAwesome! And I know just who you're reffering to! I'll PM you in a sec!
KingdomKey23 2008-07-13 ch 3,	abuseSo far I like what I see. The humor of Paper Mario has managed to mix in well with the game; though it still loosely follow KH, you've at least tried to be original. A couple grammer errors but nothing bad. However, I'm a little upset with you right now. Why? This is something I've said over a hundred times, and after all this time people still haven't abide to it. Please do not copy lines from my stories without asking me. This is something I hate! Sorry if I sound spiteful, but I've been scarred for life because of it. I've already spot two occurrence. 1. “The door has open, Sokka!” Zukko said, turning to Sokka. “Do you know what this means?” “Um… we’re going to Disneyland?” Sokka asked sarcastically. 2. “A meaningless effort… one who knows nothing can understand nothing.” the man said quietly. “You know there are many answers, but you will not know all the questions. What about that door? What do you think is behind it?” I added the line, "You know there are many answers, but you will not know..." Listen, dude, please ask me before you add jokes. That kinda contridicts what you said about me using Kingdom Hearts. From what it looks like, you're relying a bit on my story. Try not to do that; I'm very sensative about ir. One last thing: please don't pester me over reading your story. I'm a really busy person, and I just recovered from a nasty depression. I don't want any more pressure weighing on my heart. I will try to read it when I can. While it did sound a bit negative, I still enjoyed the chapter. Keep up the good work. Good luck, rock on, and keep playing Nintendo. KingdomKey23
Black Scepter 2008-06-20 ch 3,	abuseMichael here, Whoo, sorry it took so long to review, it's a very interesting blend with the Manga and the game again. A spider that plays fetch, if that wasn't weird enough it's a crazy clown laughing at them. Clowns are creepy. A free addmission to Six Flags? Disney Land? Spoofs anyone? Michael of Black Scepter
pride1289 2008-06-18 ch 3,	abuseNiGHTS?? Peter Pan? Something? That's all I got. TTFN
Shelby the Hedgehog 2008-06-18 ch 3,	abuse...You're basing this mostly on the Kingdom Hearts manga then the game aren't you? I have both, so I know... Now the Clock Tower... I'm just gonna go out on a limb here and say "NiGHTS".
NUTCASE71733 2008-06-18 ch 3,	abuseCount Bleck cracks me up with how he talks lol. As far as music goes, I'll likely need to think about what would suit each individual situation before I went and named any tunes. There are some at the top of my head that would sound great in this story, though. I'll get back to you later.
thebladeofchaos 2008-06-02 ch 2,	abusenice
Shelby the Hedgehog 2008-05-21 ch 2,	abuseBleck is so weird. I don't think I'll ever get 'im.
pride1289 2008-05-21 ch 2,	abuseYAY! chap 2! WOOT! I think I know what will happen soon. There should be more Count Bleck. Cuz he's awsome.
NUTCASE71733 2008-05-21 ch 2,	abuseThere are a few spelling errors, but nothing particullarly wrong with this chapter. Nice work.
Black Scepter 2008-05-21 ch 2,	abuseThe manga had its good points when it came to story, but the action scenes were a bit...bland. But it is very true to the KH game/manga, with adding it's own uniqe twist. Poor Luigi, always misunderstood. Michael had an idea about how to use the song His World. He suggested you use it as Sokka's Theme. Black Scepter team.

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