I love this. It was so cute and I always love an angery and jealous yuki -3-

Fantastic! And even better, it was realistic. My heart actually squeezed when Yuki was saying those horrible things to Shu! Great writing too!

Ur freakin' awesome! Yuki is so hot when he's overly protective and jealous! *fan girl squeal* But in the beginning when Yuki said those mean harsh words, i was like DAMn thats mean! He just played Shuichi OUT.

ah!

how cute, how cute.

oh, i love it!

(screaming in the background while trying to fight off a nosebleed)

xOxO

Island Honey

I prey for Tohma's well-being...

...Wow, I really liked reading this. I read the title and I was like, 'hmm, what's this about?' I'm glad I clicked on it because I loved it! Great detail in your writing, I didn't see any grammer mistakes, and you caught everyone's characters pretty well. Yuki was just little OOC, but if's it Yuki, I don't care about OOCness. Nice job for your first!

...that's funny

Nice! You write very beautifully...I love this short story and hope to read more Eiri and Shuichi stories from you. Bye!

This was exactly the kind of story I needed after finals week. It was cute!

801: 00 Nicely done. I was nearly crying... poor Shu-chan... normaly I would be pissed at Yuki but he ruined his "I'm-a-Bad-Boy" reputatuon for Shu-chan... and he screwed him twice :D

TEWG: OO I WILL NOT CRY OVER THIS SAD FLUFFY FIC...

TEWG & 801

My house stays too clean when you’re gone. Food doesn’t get eaten. Your side of the bed is cold. I can’t get my work done not knowing if you’re ok. And the house it way to quiet.” - That was very very sweet of Yuki! :D

That was amazing! Can't wait to read more stories from you in the future!

O.G.

This is a cool one-shot,Yuki goes afer Shu (finally for once),& Touma is so sly.I liked it._

good story. liked it a lot. hope to read more stories from you soon. l8r