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Pjazz
2008-05-20
ch 1,
abuseI really enjoy reading your fanfics. Without doubt you're one of the most orginal writers here.

A crossover fic is a tough write - and you're trying a cross-genre one too, sci fi to comedy. You succeed very well. The humour's never overdone and the characters are true to the respective shows.
Matt
2008-05-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was great. It'd be funny if Derek decided to place a call if they did a show on something like annoying roomrates and he called to complain about their resident Terminator. I wonder how long it'd take before Fraiser asks "You wouldn't happen to know a teenager named John would you?"
happyhooligan2001
2008-05-13
ch 1,
abuseThat was hilarious! I can't wait to hear from Dick in Gotham City. I have no idea who Zuko is.
klylu
2008-05-13
ch 1,
abuseoh boy, that was funny! :D

you should write a second piece, with dick from gotham as the main character... lol (sorry, not quite familiar with the 3rd one. the 1st 'zuko' that came to my mind was a certain danny... :/ )

back to your story... this line:

Sarah replies, “What else is new?”

Cameron responds, “Well the bees are becoming extinct, and no one knows why.”

was one of the funniest (and probably truest to character) i've ever read... :D
timkhj
2008-05-13
ch 1,
abuseAh hahahaha! Great crack fic!
TEC
2008-05-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseHAHAHAHA LOLWIN

:) excellent job. that's all i can say. favorite line -

"No, you got to get free therapy! Why can't I?"

"That wasn't free therapy! That was forced institutionalization!"

That, and "Well the bees are becoming extinct, and no one knows why."

You are most definitely in your element. I expect more fics of this nature ;)
dakota423
2008-05-12
ch 1,
abuseOh my gosh, this is great. A very desperate John calls a television hotline... wow. Another great piece of funny, keep it up.
Tpolich
2008-05-12
ch 1,
abuseLol... GOD NO NOT THE BEES

I LOVE THE BEES
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