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| Asia1st 2008-09-07 ch 5, | abuseThis story is extremely well written because although I have almost no idea what's going on, I'm dying to find out what happens next! I'm very interested to see what happens with all these characters. But quick question: You made it seem like Demeter would have a large part at the beginning but so far she's barely been in it. I'm just wondering if she will have a large part in it at all. |
| Ellie 2008-07-14 ch 5, anon. | abuseLoved this story but still slightly confused. Explanation please? |
| ame 2008-06-13 ch 5, anon. | abusegreat fic but right now i am so confused good luck on your fic God bless |
| Megfly 2008-06-11 ch 5, anon. | abuseI'll admit I had a moment of pause over which white queen was Victoria (I'm gonna take a wild guess here and say that the kitten in this chapter is her), but other then that, I've not found anything confusing. I love irregular timelines, and I've been able to follow the chronology of this reletively easily, so I wouldn't worry about that. Also, I love not quite knowing why things are happening, 'cause I trust things will be explained later. A touch of mystery is a good thing. Anyhoo, I still adore this story, and this chapter was excellent as per usual. Lovely m'dear! |
| ame 2008-06-02 ch 4, anon. | abusewhy would Tug go to his evil bro i feel so bad for the tribe keep going |
| The Penguin Ate My Homework 2008-06-02 ch 4, | abuse...I'm speechless! Whatever I was expecting when I read this chapter, it wasn't this! (That's a good thing, by the way.) It's awesome to see such an original concept, and it's really just amazing. I'm in love with the story and I can't wait to see more...please update soon? -Penguin |
| Hazel Rosen 2008-06-02 ch 2, | abuse*squeals* 8D Mistoffelees! That's his mother! Ye! This is a great story so far! :3 I was thinking of doing something on Macavity's past as well, but I assure you, it wouldn't be like this. This is cool, though. I'm going to continue diligently reading. |
| Laocoons 2008-06-02 ch 4, | abuseOuch. Sucker punched to the gut with that last line, eh? I do hope that Mistoffelees pulls himself together soon. D; |
| Megfly 2008-06-01 ch 4, | abuseHoly crap, holy crap, HOLY CRAP! I am completely speechless right now. That was...wow. That was incredible. Bone chilling and horrifying and incredible. GAH! Fan-freaking-tastic. Don't you dare stop writing this, ok? Or I'll...cry. A lot. |
| Rufftipuss 2008-05-21 ch 3, anon. | abuseExcellent chapter, great to see a different side to Misto. I can't wait for the next section. |
| ame 2008-05-20 ch 3, anon. | abuseomg...that was crazy Misto is evil and Victoria is his chosen mate keep going...also yes i was shocked |
| Siltizamile 2008-05-19 ch 2, anon. | abuseyour story is amazing. the plot line is really good and it's very well written. please update this as soon as possible. one question though, the queen captured for Macavity, was it Demeter? at first i assumed it was Demeter, but when i looked back it never actually said who it was. |
| Megfly 2008-05-19 ch 2, | abuseHoly crapola, this was even more awesome than the first chapter (I love fics with a dark edge to them *cackles with maniacal glee*) can't wait to see what yo're gonna do with this. Yayness! You are now officially on my author alert :) |
| UnderSlytherin 2008-05-18 ch 2, | abuseOmg I am just positively hanging off of every word! As soon as I saw the bit about the tuxedoed queen I was like "ooh, that's cute!" then I saw about the little tuxedo kitten to come and I'm all like "ZOMG NEXT CHAPTER!" Seriously! I love it when people set Quaxo/Mistoffelees and Macavity up in a father-son fashion (at least that's what I'm hoping is going on here!). It seems so right to me for some reason (that's probably why I set it up that way too). I seriously cannot wait until the next chapter comes out! |
| Queen Em 2008-05-17 ch 2, | abusedun dun dun! The tuxedo cat?! Yep you;ve got to love foreshadowing! Love this story its so clever but kind of spooky. Looking forward to more |