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| Talyn 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuse*smirks* Nicely done. Hope the lieutenant has better luck keeping it caught next time. |
| Jessica Malatori 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuseLOL. Very funny, and a very descriptive piece. |
| Arae Arca 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseLOL, loved it! Especially the last bit. 'Buzz.. "Go to hell."' XD |
| sjam 2008-05-17 ch 1, | abuseFabulous! A good read for some light hearted humour I love the ending especially: Maybe he had imagined the whole thing… Maybe he really did need the extra sleep… Maybe — Bz… “Go to hell.” Well written, I love it! |
| Arcadia-sama 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseAw, poor Kaidan. XD That was great, though! More, I say! More! |
| Fegli 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuselol I DID like it. Very cute, and kind of touching, at the same time. "She used to pay him a quarter for every little insect he smacked with the old plastic fly swatter." |
| Parle 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseThat's hilarious. Kaidan and the fly. The entire fic pretty much concentrated on that crazy fly. Should be a pairing: Kaidan/fly. |
| sinvraal 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this, light and funny without being silly. Good stuff. I'm new fanfic too, welcome! It's a great sandbox to play in. |
| Nvrmore 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseHa ha ha. That was cute. Poor Alenko. :) |
| magooglersriot 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abusehahahaha! This is hilarious! "Go to hell." so funny. Great job, I hope you write some more stories. |