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Reviews For: Buggy Trouble

Talyn
2008-06-06
ch 1,
abuse*smirks* Nicely done. Hope the lieutenant has better luck keeping it caught next time.
Jessica Malatori
2008-06-03
ch 1,
abuseLOL. Very funny, and a very descriptive piece.
Arae Arca
2008-05-28
ch 1,
abuseLOL, loved it! Especially the last bit.

'Buzz..

"Go to hell."'

XD
sjam
2008-05-17
ch 1,
abuseFabulous! A good read for some light hearted humour I love the ending especially:

Maybe he had imagined the whole thing…

Maybe he really did need the extra sleep…

Maybe —

Bz…

“Go to hell.”

Well written, I love it!
Arcadia-sama
2008-05-15
ch 1,
abuseAw, poor Kaidan. XD That was great, though! More, I say! More!
Fegli
2008-05-13
ch 1,
abuselol I DID like it. Very cute, and kind of touching, at the same time. "She used to pay him a quarter for every little insect he smacked with the old plastic fly swatter."
Parle
2008-05-13
ch 1,
abuseThat's hilarious. Kaidan and the fly. The entire fic pretty much concentrated on that crazy fly. Should be a pairing: Kaidan/fly.
sinvraal
2008-05-13
ch 1,
abuseI really liked this, light and funny without being silly. Good stuff.

I'm new fanfic too, welcome! It's a great sandbox to play in.
Nvrmore
2008-05-13
ch 1,
abuseHa ha ha. That was cute. Poor Alenko. :)
magooglersriot
2008-05-12
ch 1,
abusehahahaha! This is hilarious! "Go to hell." so funny. Great job, I hope you write some more stories.
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