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Reviews For: Akito and Momji

Hiro Sohma
2008-05-25
ch 6,
abuseWhat the hell is this chapter?! Who the heck are those characters?! I think you've put up the wrong chapter.
Hiro Sohma
2008-05-23
ch 5,
abuseI'll ask again...who the heck is Haiti? There's no Haiti in Furuba!! Unless he's/she's an OC...
electric-dreamer
2008-05-18
ch 4,
abuseI think you need some help with your punctuation. Quotation marks (") go around the whole sentence when someone is speaking, not just the first word.
Hiro Sohma
2008-05-12
ch 3,
abuseThings I like:
Nice concept
Ha...Hatori's smacking Akito!! XD
Yuki is so nice.
i am hottter than u
2008-05-12
ch 1,
abusewow! iam ALREEDY hooked!1! my fav part waz wen akito cam in da dorway. i thoht i waz gona dye i waz laffin so hard. u got 2 up8 SPCA!!1!11

do u tink u cna add my oc in2 storie? if u dont i cry.
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