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| Hiro Sohma 2008-05-25 ch 6, | abuseWhat the hell is this chapter?! Who the heck are those characters?! I think you've put up the wrong chapter. |
| Hiro Sohma 2008-05-23 ch 5, | abuseI'll ask again...who the heck is Haiti? There's no Haiti in Furuba!! Unless he's/she's an OC... |
| electric-dreamer 2008-05-18 ch 4, | abuseI think you need some help with your punctuation. Quotation marks (") go around the whole sentence when someone is speaking, not just the first word. |
| Hiro Sohma 2008-05-12 ch 3, | abuseThings I like: Nice concept Ha...Hatori's smacking Akito!! XD Yuki is so nice. |
| i am hottter than u 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abusewow! iam ALREEDY hooked!1! my fav part waz wen akito cam in da dorway. i thoht i waz gona dye i waz laffin so hard. u got 2 up8 SPCA!!1!11 do u tink u cna add my oc in2 storie? if u dont i cry. |