 Prussian Red 5/2/12 . chapter 1Nfhsndkfjdoakbapqn SO CUTE!
And it's nice to see an examination of their relationship minus the slash, you know? But I think you got them down pat. :) Great job. |
 Tana112 9/4/11 . chapter 1Adorable, and quite accurate. One of my favourite parts of this show is how the 'bots relate to one another. Especially ones who are so opposite as Bumblebee and Prowl. |
 Blitz-Krazi-1 8/23/11 . chapter 1Instant favourite!
I think this was sweet, though short, but it was prefect that way :) |
 Kangarooney 8/13/11 . chapter 1Aww, I like it. Short and sweet. Just perfect. :) You really portrayed their brotherly relationship well. Keep up the good work!
-Kangarooney- |
 Yokai Hebitori 3/9/11 . chapter 1I agree on every point that the previous reviewer pointed out, [Sounddrive].
So, Excellant Work!
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Yokai |
 Sounddrive 2/19/11 . chapter 1Hard to find a non-slash story about these guys.
Anyhow, I agree with the fact that they're like brothers on this topic, and as the TFA series went on, especially in the episode of 'Human Error' Parts I & II, when they all looked to one another as a family member.
I can see Optimus as the father figure most of the time, Ratchet as the grumpy Grandpa, Prowl as the quiet, eldest brother, Bulkhead as the one in the middle of everything (and the middle, biggest brother), Bee as the energetic, enthusiastic young brother and Sari as the young sister that everyone looks out for since she's pretty young
This is beautifully written and I'm placing this in my favorites! *click* |
 longgnol 10/21/09 . chapter 1very cute. the relationship suits them perfectly. |
 Cocomon 7/18/09 . chapter 1You got it perfectly. Fucking Perfectly. I love it. |
 Krypticated 6/26/09 . chapter 1Aww... cute!
I think this would be a great opening to a Bee X Prowl story! |
 Amaya Dragon 6/23/09 . chapter 1Aw, so cute! And I'm usually not that much of a "cute" kind of person. ) I had to laugh. "Trademarked looks" That was great, and I can so see Prowl as being like a big brother to little Bee.
In fact, this relationship is like me and my brother, my more quite nature clashing almost constantly with his more wild one, but we still get along and manage to survive in the prosess. Well writen! |
 TheNightshade43 3/6/09 . chapter 1Aww, that is so cool! Prowl and Bumblebee as brothers! I love it. It's good to see a non-slash story of them two. Great job! :) |
 I Give Headaches To Aspirin 2/20/09 . chapter 1haha col love it :) |
 Lily Carroll 1/29/09 . chapter 1Nyow *_*
Your fic is very adorable!
*hug Bee and prowl* |
 Miles333 12/30/08 . chapter 1That story was so sweet. I'm really glad that Nightwatcher'sunknowngirlrecommended it to me. :) |
 Yuro-Faita911 11/28/08 . chapter 1actually, I like it this way better
though others are still good but *shrug* XP
it's well-written
although it is a bit short
buut still great
other than that, keep it up man! *w00t*
over and out |