 Dirtberry 2008-10-12 . chapter 1Wow. You made me tear up. I liked this so much. :)
The summary was ambigious, but I decided to give it a click anyway, and I wasn't disappointed. Your prose has a distinctive style that taps into the heart and stays there...It's poignant, it's earnest enough, and it is precisely which that captures the dynamics of the Clorith pairing so perfectly that makes the pairing comes through here in this fic more beautiful than any Clorith fan would ask for.
I can't ask for anything less. :) |
 Abysilityy 2008-09-07 . chapter 1Awh I loved that :) I love your description, and its such a refresher to see a Clorith pop up from KH once in a while :) Great job again Atlantie! |
 Clorith 2008-07-07 . chapter 1Yay, a KH fic! I always love reading KH fics more than FFVII ones, it's nice to have them in a world where Aerith is alive and Cloud is determined and on a mission, rather than wallowing around and moping. Please write more KH fic, m'kay? Oh my heart skipped a beat when Cloud jumped down to get her! |
 Drake Clawfang 2008-06-13 . chapter 1Another fine story. It had a sort of surreal sense to it, with Aerith dancing like that, and that fit giving Sephiroth's nature in Kingdom Hearts, until you got to the ending and it was serious again. A nice contrast. |
 Soul of AquaBlue 2008-06-11 . chapter 1so sad TT-TT |
 flowerangel050 2008-06-10 . chapter 1so touching...*tear*
Great job!! |
 Lydia-hime 2008-05-20 . chapter 1Sometimes, Aerith thought process can seem very confusing... like in FFVII, half the time you would wonder what the heck was she talking about when she was talking about the Ancient stuff and about Holy and such.
This is kinda like in a way, and you can only understand it when it's revealed to you and the way it became revealed to Cloud. I don't think I'm making that much sense, but I had that feeling while I was reading this.
I really liked it. Your Clorith stories are always amazing. Great job. |
 Aerith-Heartilly13 2008-05-14 . chapter 1Really, really, good. I can totally see this happening- and Cloud screaming gave me chills. =) Good job, can't wait to read your other C/A stuff! |
 Kaleta 2008-05-13 . chapter 1OHH!! its so sad D: Poor Aerith, she's so scared ;-; At least Cloud is there to comfort her, if only he'd say something xD |