Reviews for High school Horrors

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aznillusion183 2008-07-07 ch 6,	abusewow, your storyline is pretty interesting. I thought the festival was fun, and your descriptions are good. wouldn't it be odd if robin and zoro ended up together, since her teaching stint is ending soon? anyway, keep up the good work. I know you probably want constructive reviews but I like your story too much, heh. the characters are kept in character, which is very good.
Galleta 2008-07-07 ch 6,	abuseA a a a a a a a Im speechless! Every part, every idea, every paragraph was perfect. Loved how you started in Robin's perspective and how you showed us every part of the festival with each pairing. Luffy and Nami were lovely. Vivi was incredible. I can see her with her fierce stare in the middle of the crowd on a chair yelling the ending bid for Sanji... Im worried for Zoro... who won the bid? But the end... OMGOSH! You did manage to fit those two sexy gods in the fic! I stoped breathing when Ace entered the stage I swear! I can perfectly picture Smoker's face! Hilarious! And the amount! How much did he paid! Ah! I will explode because it was too exciting and too sexy and too lovely and too perfect! The last scene is the greatest thing you have ever written. :p
Vathany 2008-07-06 ch 5,	abusehaha More moree !! >< You are right it's wrong between a teacher and his student . . . BUT it's nearly the end of high school for Zoro so ... WHATEVER lol just go ahead ! Awesome =) no need to say more update soon please ^^
piffle princess 2008-07-02 ch 5, anon.	abuseWow! I loved this chapter :D Zoro/Robin ♥_♥
Wintersprings 2008-07-02 ch 5,	abuseThat was so cute. I loved this chapter, you should do more.
afro952 2008-07-01 ch 5, anon.	abusethat was good. Nice use of words. keep making more chapters
Galleta 2008-07-01 ch 5,	abuseI liked how you told this chapter in flashes. It was different. I think that you are getting better with this fic, really. It's more smooth.. It flows better.. Perhaps I feel that because we are getting a nice evolution of each character in the fic. Great as always. You killed me again with "the killer smile" of Ace. X_X Does Ace's date will appear in this fic? Or it isnt important to the plot? I dont mind at all if we have to read a date of those two. I will sacrifice myself... LOL ;p Now what do you have in store for Sanji. I wonder...
Boby09 2008-07-01 ch 5,	abusegreat chapter i can't wait for the next one! ^_^
Vathany 2008-06-21 ch 4,	abuseHAHA yeahh ZORO ! Get your reward hahaha fufu I really loved this chapter ^^ keep on the good work as usual hehe hm what the reward could be ? =Pp
silverlodi 2008-06-18 ch 4,	abuseThis is really good. i love how u put everything from the anime into it to the last detail, like the holes that nami sowed up in luffy's hat. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Galleta 2008-06-18 ch 4,	abuseOh the dream was so perfect, and in the middle of the class! Priceless! And Luffy and Nami love story is becoming really cute. LOL Luffy's speech was great, indeed. But the spanish of the professor... “Tienen un buen fin de semana y terminan ejercicios J-M por lunes. Salud.” "Que tengan un buen fin de semana, terminen los ejercicios J-M para el Lunes, Hasta Luego". LOL I dont know why I found your spanish cute... I can help to correct... Great chapter as always.
Pirateking1 2008-06-18 ch 4,	abusei loved this chapter! It's really trickly suspenseful, if you know what i mean, with Nami and Luffy; haha I wonder what the next exuse will be. And also with Zoro and Robin, Zoro having his "dreams" in class. Haha Please update soon! :D
Wintersprings 2008-06-15 ch 3,	abuseFreaking awesome chapter! I'll look forward the next ones XD
OPfan 2008-06-09 ch 3, anon.	abuseWah, the development of Zoro/Robin is great! XD I love it. By the way, the only male slash I see here is Ace and Smoker... XD Kinda good too.
zoRo 2008-06-09 ch 1, anon.	abusenot only did you butchered Spanish, you also murdered English. I suggest that you seek the help of a beta reader otherwise this fic is nothing but a work of a grade-schooler. PLot-wise I think it's ok.

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