I really enjoyed this story :3 i love how it's so in-character[well at least i think so..]
hmm i think the ending Demyx did that on purpose to kinda prove Roxas that he DOES have a best friend.. Axel! teehee i kinda felt sad for Demyx.. i can really relate to him though.. since my personality makes me seem so stupid yet when it comes to school im in like all honors and good grades:] And then i kinda dont have many friends and get picked on but not really though.. lol.
Very well done 5/5 :D

Aw, that's so sweet

That was quaint, sweet (:

~ADN

this was very well-done. bravissimo! there's so little good fic in this archive; thank you for contributing to what little there is. ^_^

Hello Pastel Ink (nice name!) :]

This was a really good, enjoyable fanfic to read! I liked the flow, how one thing lead to another. I think you protrayed Roxas' side of curiosity pretty well because he is the kind of person who wants answers but can never really get them. Demyx is awesome too :] I liked how you added Axel in the end, nice touch. Hope you write more!

Ttyl
MissInvisible

I like it. It's a good take on Demyx.