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OMG! i love IT~~!

=3 nic work ^..^

Whoa...O.O That was some pretty rough sex. I'm glad that Cloud isn't angry at Zack though. :)

Hot !
Beautiful Angst!

I really enjoyed the mood of this fic. If there's anything I love, it's a PWP with a good whack of the angst-mallet. XD

Great job!

I don't know why I like it, but, I LOVE IT! That's mostly all I have to say. Oh, one more thing, I'm faving it! =D

...I guess you described everything... Even how Cloud came all over Zack's fingers.

...Just the way I like my smut fics. :]

This was totally yummy. I loved it; you were able to really make the reader feel the angst in there, along with the overally sexiness of it. And it was awesome.

Than kyou for writing this!

Aww so sweet and hot. Total fav. I wish I could write like that.Lucky!

Still nummy the second time around. Love that roughness as the frustration makes Zack lose control and pass the hurt on to someone else. So lucky Cloud's more than willing to receive him.

Oh hot! You don't see much rough Zack/Cloud, and oh I liked it! You and marchwarden need to talk to each other more. A lot more. I like the influence you're having on each other's writing. (Wonders if I have a vacant tower room I can lock you both in.)

I loved the tension of this, Cloud's uncertainty overridden by pleasure, the dramatic lightning outside. Very moody. Very yummy, with a nice bit of sweetness at the end. ::sigh::

Bad day much, Zack? xD

That was very well written. that's pretty much all i can say. *faves*