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Reviews For: The Second Pretear

Vampire Miko 159
2008-07-02
ch 1,
abuseIt sounds very interesting!
I can't wait to read more...
I will admit... I am a tid bit confused...but I think I will be okay once I read more...
Hee Hee
^_^
-CagedRaven-
2008-05-28
ch 1,
abuseit felt a bit rushed but good at the same time. cant wait to read more.
Kagome Lady of Darkness
2008-05-28
ch 1,
abuseAwesome work! I really love it!
Lovelywitch
2008-05-27
ch 1,
abuseYou know, the way things're going, 7you can name your story "It's you". Update soon!
Silver Moon Vampire
2008-05-27
ch 1,
abuseUpdate.
Bishonen'sFoxyMiko
2008-05-17
ch 1,
abuseThat was a pretty good start. I can't wait to read more Chibes^^ Hope you update soon^^
darkangeldemon2009
2008-05-16
ch 1,
abusei liked the story pleace update soon
Kaidaia The Run Away Advent
2008-05-13
ch 1,
abusevery wicked chapter
WhiteDemoness11
2008-05-13
ch 1,
abuseHeh heh this is going to be funny. XD Miko pretear? Lends for some odd ideas doesn't it?
KyouKaraMaouFan
2008-05-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseWhy did Himeno not discuss Kagome with Sasame or Goh when they obviously remembered her? Why could she only talke with Hayate? Although contrived, this story at least sounds more realistic and in character than your other one.

I also wanted to point out an error in my review of your other story. It was not dragons but bearbees that Gwendal protected with his magic even though they could have harmed the town. Just wanted to clarify in case you looked it up.
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