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chasingchandler
2009-06-06 . chapter 31
One thing I really liked about this was that each prompt was connected into a bigger picture. I've never seen that before, so I enjoyed it~ :D
FlurryDivider
2008-12-31 . chapter 18
I had to do the meme.

1. Roy's alchemy (burn 'em to a crisp and they can't get up)
2. Animals by Nickelback (seems fun to kill zombies to, also is really upbeat XD)
3. Ed (he is a great fighter, hes witty, and hes short like me =D [I'm not short, I'm FUN SIZE!])
Sheepisasin
2008-12-29 . chapter 31
Don't tell me it's AL?!

Ah, well this is a great finale. I will definitely read Delta nao.
Sheepisasin
2008-12-29 . chapter 22
Awh. Poor Jean! And WTF, does Mustang have SPD or something?! :D I am lovin your stories!
Sheepisasin
2008-12-29 . chapter 16
I owe you ivy?

I think that's right... heh, good job on the story so far, and your A/N are very entertaining.
Sheepisasin
2008-12-29 . chapter 1
Mm... somehow, I think Al is a little OOC. I'm pretty sure that he would be creeped out so find that Ed was homosexual. I mean,this speaks for Ed's affair with Mustang too, but still. I am very amused by this notion...
YukinoKara
2008-09-06 . chapter 16
I just have to ask, was the message "I love you" or am I just insane? :D
Chanberry
2008-08-15 . chapter 31
Aw... such a sweet ending... X3
I love Malfoy as a ferret
2008-08-14 . chapter 31
YA! everything worked out great. My guess is eather...Roy and furey((sp?)) or roy and falmen
Kitsune Tanaka
2008-08-11 . chapter 31
YAY! Wait, it's over? NO! *runs to Delta and curses people for locking their internet when she pirates*
Luna-Lunak
2008-08-10 . chapter 31
I don't really think I will be up to reading Delta (I'm Ed's follower, I go where he goes) but my Bet for the pairing will be... hmm... Maes would be too clieche besides I think he's already dead here, Havoc and Ed are out for obvious reasons so are females and Armstrong... Al is tucked away with Winry if I remember correctly and I think you would go for someone from old crew anyway. So whom to bet on? The choices left are Breda, Kain and Falman afterall. Roy in your story stakes claims and serches for something he can own... Breda would be the choice coz he's got the brains, but Fuery on the other hand has this 'I go only for feelings' factor (at least in canon version, NO ONE will tell me he really is a cold hearted calculating person, those fics make me laugh). Falman... is too blank? I think. [Oh, I missed the part saying that it's Office Affair. There goes half of my useless blabling.) So those are my bets.

I, of course, congratulate you on congratulate you on succesfully finishing this fic (should have done that at the begining, eh?)and wording WHY exactly Jean had problems in love. But I'm in no way saying goodbye! You're on my alert list girl so do not think I'm disappearing just like that! We will see each other in future reviews! (In hopefully HxE or ExR fic. [No, not Heindrich. Still Havoc.])

Meanwhile,
Hugs & kisses & Cookies
Luna Lunak
s909
2008-08-08 . chapter 31
Another great story. I really enjoyed this last chapter.
Bar-Ohki
2008-08-07 . chapter 31
That was pretty kick ass.
Sin Of Tragedy
2008-08-07 . chapter 31
Oh my fucking god. I was so happy for this chapter that I began crying in pure joy as soon as Havoc stepped in. X3

But, damn! Talk about romatic/knight in shining armor! GAWD! I absolutely love you (I know, I told you this last time), and your work has no words to discribe!

I can't wait to read Delta! -hearts-
radcat38
2008-08-07 . chapter 31
Wow...loved the last chapter. I vote for more!! Just keep on going after Delta...let the muses take you. I KNEW it was Roy hugging Ed. I knew it. But I loved how this ended. Jean got his own moxie back and showed up like a knight in blue shinning armour. Ed did not need rescueing but nice when someone who cares about you suddenly shows up when you need them. Cool. Glad that they got back together...but you did such a good job creating suspense that I wondered if Ed was really going to end up with Mustang. Nice work. Roy redeemed himself somewhat when he walked away and left them alone. Did Jean hit Roy? Or just grab Ed's arm?? So..now on to Roy and Delta...those left in the office are Valman, Breda, and Fuery...and then there is Al but is Al still in armour? Plus Ed may not approve of Roy with his little brother. Is Bradley still alive...hahah...still some Generals out there...Haruko? Where is Envy and Greed and Kimbley and Archer? Then there is Russell but Fletcher is too young...This is fun! But I probably went to far afield on the guessing but I was enjoying it immensely. So probably someone in the office...poor Riza but sometimes I prefer to be the best friend too. Cannot wait for you to publish your new series!
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