 Shadowess 88 2009-12-02 . chapter 12O... Ominous. Quite ominous. Especially with the solo Jaiden chappy, minus the giant demon dudes of course. I wonder if his name was Frank... seemed like a Frank to me. Could it be Frank that was right behind Jaiden at the end there? That is some funky place. I wonder if its all an illusion... Especially with the glaring trees. Good luck with the writing darling dearest! |
 Shadowess 88 2009-12-02 . chapter 11So she was streaking! I was confused a bit by that. Must've been warm that day. I've never been streaking, though I have debated writing a scene in one of my stories where skinny dipping ends go wrong... like squirrels stealing away the clothes.
I adore Jaiden's rap! It rules. Go Jaiden. Go Jaiden. GO GO! |
 Shadowess 88 2009-12-02 . chapter 10*whimpers* twas shorter... but I review regardless! Not hungry from blood anymore after the baby was killed. Not cool. Not. Cool. |
 Shadowess 88 2009-12-02 . chapter 9Oh? Hiei and you will kill for reviews? Can you kill Alan from Escaflowne? He's the spokesperson for Herbal Essences shampoo and he must die.
Sorry it took me so long to review!! I've only had time now to review. Those flashbacks that Jaiden has can be qutie graphic if you read it slowly... Makes me kinda hungry actually.
NEXT CHAPTER!! |
 Heather is a Hanyou Neko 2009-11-19 . chapter 12okay so i jus have to say that i love this story. it is amazing. Jaiden oddly reminds me of myself. and some of the converstions she has i have had before. maybe not to Hiei, Kurama, Yusuke, Kuwabara and the others but still. but yeah it is amazing. well thats it i guess. oh and trees are always trying to kill you thats just the way they are. there is no stopping it. well now thats it for now. talk to you later maybe. byes. |
 chibi Phoebe 2009-11-17 . chapter 12I have just signed up so that I could express my opinion of your fanfic. It is amazing and so are you.
Its a bit wierd to read as my twin sister and I both have similar psychotic tendencies excellently displayed by jaiden.
so nice to know that others share in our hardships in the world (damn trees!). Anyway just felt like I should congratulate you on ANOTHER engrossing chapter, I bow down to your literary genius please continue to make me luagh so hard I have to run to the toilet for fear of wetting myself. ^_^ |
 fullmoon dreamer 2009-11-01 . chapter 12Hi sorry i havent been reviewing. So I still love the fic and hope u put out one soon. Also i hope your good and life is teating you well. Moon |
 supercyco214 2009-10-25 . chapter 10I WOULD PAY MONEY TO SEE KURAMA TWIRL HIS ROSEWHIP IN A LASO MOTION! *clears throat* now that thats over with...it must suck eing jaiden...having to watch hiei train in his sweaty and shirtless glory...i would have a hard tie not staring to...lo i love your story and think that thi story is amaazing...and hiei should stay there next time! and not get up to go woner *finds hiei and hits him in the back of the head full force* all better//anger gone ;] bye! keep up the good work! |
 SoraSunset 2009-10-17 . chapter 12*snuggles Puu*
Yay, cliffhanger!
We're okay, right Puu?
Puu: Puu! (Let me the crap go!)
I think he agrees :D
Thanks for another awesome chapter! You're great!
P.S.- When in doubt, use bug spray! (..Don't ask) |
 littlekawaiifirefox 2009-10-16 . chapter 12LULZ!! i would NEVER kill you for such a thing! i give cliffy's all the time! XD
again, HYSTERICAL! i loved it! ^^- can't wait for the next one! |
 littlekawaiifirefox 2009-10-16 . chapter 11i LOVED this chapter! i laughed so much... sometimes i almost couldn't stop laughing... hahaha... i love Jaiden's character so much! ^^-
on to the next chappie! XD |
 Angel of Randomosity 2009-10-16 . chapter 12has there ever been a day where she is NOT getting into trouble...? |
 dragonwingedangel 2009-10-16 . chapter 12Hahaah I love Jaiden and her amazing randomness!
I hate cheese too!
I wonder where the army came from?
Or who that GIANT guy was!
Hahahha I loved the part where she just chucks the dagger and him and is like '...But then again, the guy was huge, so missing him would’ve been more impressive...'
I can't wait for the update!
Don't take too long!
I'll do my victory dance when you update! |
 HereAfter 2009-10-16 . chapter 12So I totally forgot how the last chapter ended and I was completely confused with how this one started. I was like: 'Wait a damn second! Is she back in her grave?' And then I remembered what really happened. Isn't memory loss wonderful?
Anyway, what's with the "we fell"? Last time I checked Jaiden was only one person. Hm, interesting...
I hope your inspiration comes back because I really want to know what happens next. And I want some Hiei/Jaiden action. |
 Crimson Romance 2009-10-16 . chapter 12Ah! I love the Ting Ting's. My dad has yet to learn to fully apprecdiate them. |