aww. This is such a great story! And I totally love the last line! Now that I call double entendre! ;D

Wow! That was so well written! Excellent job!

I love this fic! I mean it's Calleigh and Eric so that's a given, but it's written beautifully as well. Nice job. :)

o update more soon this is good i cant wait for more update more soon

This was amazingly-fantastily-brillianty-fantabytosa. Or, in case that didn't make sense, awesome.

This is exactly what the show *should* have done - focus on the the aftermath of Ambush and All in. *sighs* stupid writers and their lack of continuity. And your characterisation wasn't off; sure Cal doesn't cry... but the way you wrote it (and the experience that she'd had) makes the end moments believable.

And wow did I love the end moments!

Great job. :D

About friggin' time they got together.

Excellent little ficlet. :D It was an interesting revelation about Hagen's nephew..I think it was? He was a real piece of work that one.

I'm glad Calleigh's letting go a bit and trusting someone else other than herself for a change. It was great, though, to see a bit of her old self come through--especially throughout the cooking bit. Loved it!

Also, the flashback to 'All In' (I think that was the second part, right?) added a nice touch the story, letting us know what happened after that episode and how it was still affecting Calleigh. She's been through so much. O_O

Great job, this is truly one of the best you've done!

Awesome. Great Job!

as i promised...
thank you so much for sending me the link.
i havent been on in a while and i missed this post.

that was absolutely beautiful.
i thought you did a fabulous job with the characters.
a lot better than the writers did in some ways.
i loved how calleigh opened up her emotions with eric.
and how this whole story was based on eric's point of view.
the case was great, not overwhelming considering the story's length.

please do the world or e/c shippers a favor and
WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE!

by the way, thanks jodie so very much for pushing
her to post this fabulously awesome story.

xoxo
elizabeth.

aw! that made me smile! you paired my favorite show and favorite book! way to be! :D

This was a great story ^_^

This was wonderful. I liked it so much. It's great that you wrote about that car ride after 'All In', because this is the first fic that has that moment. Great work. I can't wait for some more EC fics from you.

Nice story. Everything is right on point. I love how you wrote it.

aw cute :) I love Pride and Prejudice, and I'm fairly certain that every girl (whether she wants to admit it or not) also loves that book, even the strong Calleigh Duquesne. Your idea with the nephew was actually quite intriguing. If you weren't piggybacking All In, you probably could have done some crazy serial killer fic (you seem to do your research.) Also, I like that Calleigh did finally open up to Eric. They need that :)

Just a random formatting thing: does funny things with documents when you upload them. Generally, it'll add random little squares...well, maybe they're more rectangular...in random places. I think it coincides with the page breaks in whatever document you're using (i.e. word), so when you post a story, you may want to go through and make sure the formatting is how you want it.

Other than that, you write well, and I'm excited to read more from you.

Brilliant.

I totally agree with the other reviews; especially on the point about your characterisation which I thought was flawless.

I liked Calleigh's vulnerability and evident fear, contrasted with Eric's concern, love and caring nature. It worked VERY well indeed, and all in all, I just think that this piece is fantastic.

Ohh and for the record, Pride and Prejudice is one of my ultimate favourite books and you including that in this wonderful story was just superb. Nicely done.

Loved it.

For your first Miami fic, you did very well.I know how much effort you put into research and characterization, and it showed. You shone.

I liked the twist with the case referring back to John, that was interesting. I also loved how you kept it from Eric's point of view. I've seen lots of post eps that are either from Calleigh's or from both, but it was a nice change to see what Eric was going though, without being infiltrated with Calleigh's version. It was a lot more raw.

Hope you write more Miami soon. I'll be keeping an eye out for an update.

Only quibble, it's not even your fault. When you post, make sure you go back and check the formatting as you have a couple of split paragraphs where ff has inserted a space or a tab and sent it to the other line. Like I said, not your fault, but the system can be funny at times.

Well done. Loved it.