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| Annerlise92 2008-08-28 ch 1,  | abusePleaz continue this story, i luv it, update soon |
| JackedUp 2008-08-23 ch 1, | abuseawesomest ashmay i have read in a while |
| sheltie 2008-07-18 ch 1, | abusecool fic so far |
| darkaura1214 2008-07-06 ch 1, | abusethat was AWESOME you are the best writer almost but still great i cant wait till i read some more of your storys later from may |
| Mikee1 2008-07-05 ch 1, | abuseGreat story, really well written. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
| KrystalClear101 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseYay! May's back! I love reading stories about Mya's return it always adds on to the excitement that she really is coming back. Now to review. It was a really great start and I really want to read chapter two. I felt kinda bad for Dawn, but it didn't seem like anyone cared except for Brock. Maybe that's just my opinion but oh well. Great start, update soon! ;p |
| LuciferIX 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseSo, interesting start to this. Obviously Dawn isn't too happy with May's arrival, as well as a couple other people. Not to mention the fact that May was able to get a better score than her while Dawn was trying to impress Ash. Although in the end it looked as if Ash inspired May to get that last little edge she needed. And it looks like we have another author with the possibility of using the Eevee/Pikachu pairing. Of course I'm in no way objecting to this seeing as how its my favorite pokemon/pokemon shipping. No real mistakes that were too obvious, so thats a plus. I'll be looking forward to reading the second installment of this. Keep the updates coming! |
| Fender 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! Can't wait to see the next chapter! XP I'll keep a tab on this(since I'm a complete suck when it comes to ADVshipping). |
| advanceshipping4ever 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abusegreat story update soon |
| JbstormburstADV 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseHey, it's been forever!! Well, it's nice to see you on here again, but let's get down to business: This part of the fic was GREAT, and the follow-up is something that I will definitely like. I gotta say, though, a three-chapter story seems more likely to fit with this, since the catch-up alone will take an entire chapter, but then you got room for more after that. |
| zeaeevee 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseoh! IM SO LOVING THIS SO FAR!! wonder what's wrong with Dawn... hmm, ohwell! UPDATE SOON!! ~nya~ (=^_^=) |