Great story!

Interesting. I look forward to the next update.

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Thanks

I am relieved to see this piece is still in production. I absolutely loved the first two chapters (you write a wonderful Helen), but had given up hope that it would get any further. The new chapters don't seem as polished, feeling more like we're back on Shiji Saotome's level, but despite its flaws, I rather enjoyed that fic too.

As for the pairings (not that you asked) I tend to prefer Miria/Helen/Raki to Claire/Helen/Raki. Had and idea a while back that things would have been far more interesting (and better for everyone involved) if Miria had been the one to rescue Raki instead of the brain dead bimbo (Claire) and haven't really forgiven Claire since. (explaination deleted). Claire only made Raki's emotional conditions worse. (more explaination deleted). Ah well, as long as Helen/Raki is covered, I'm happy. Helen is awesome, 'nuff said. Miria, on the other hand, lost a lot of her potential post time skip, after her revenge kick was revealed. There's really not much you can do with a girl who is married to (or is going through a long and messy divorce from) her job. Galatea though, now she became unexpectedly facinating, and that new girl... whatsherface, blackmailed herself into being kidnapped by Helen and Deneve, there's definite potential there.

While we are discussing Galatea, why does she still have eyes? Shouldn't she be a blind nun by this point in the timeline? Wait, don't tell me. Anime-verse plot castration effect, right? Or maybe... well no point speculating when it looks like the author is finally back on track. Yes, must not distract the author when they have finally gotten around to writing MOAR!

Right, so as you can guess, I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Good luck, Godspeed and whatnot. Don't keep us waiting, ne?

Raki and Clare are married, all is right in the world... I just hope you'll do a flashback where he pops the question.

The discussion between Helen and Clare, and the reactions from the Ghosts were funny as hell... how long exactly till they get really curious and ask to join in?

More seriously, there are a few points that bug me somewhat :
first, I can''t imagine the Ghosts actually allowing Raki to use one of their deceased comrades' sword, nor him accepting. A Claymore's sword is what defines her, and since they use their swords as gravestones, this would be like robbing a grave (on a side note, I don't understand why no human ever tried to steal them considering how little respect Claymores get, and the quality these swords are supposed to have)
second, Galatea suppressing her Yoki so far her eyes return to their normal color - if it was possible, there would be need for the meds. Even Irene who remained in hiding for years kept her silver eyes.
third, and probably the only relevant point : it does not make sense for Raki to be travelling alone. Trying to find where Yoma come from is asking for trouble, especially on the off chance that he might find something (that and Raki is a real Yoma-magnet). You have not shown how Raki interacted with the rest of the Ghosts, but it is safe to say he is considered part of the group. Not to mention, he is Clare's husband and Helen's lover. At the very least Miria should have assigned one of them to go with him for safety.

This update was as fun too read as always ^_^
Keep the great job going(sorry but my head feels totally empty right now, so the review is really short...)

good story
... but i hate the pairing helen/raki.. i don't think it will turn this way in the "real story" ...raki will surely end up with Clare >_<

Awesome chapter, although what was all the _ about?

Ooh, wonderful change in story...Though did you go a little AU there with Raki?

I gotta say I'm rather happy you've updated this. The Claymore community is rather dull with Sideris around. I also like what you've done making Raki's apparent Yoki something gradual, not an immediate change to him which we usually see on these Raki centric stories. I think from the Galtea scene versus the rest of the chapter there seems to be a disparity in the writing style which I can't quite put my finger on, either way I enjoyed Galtea's section greatly. I also noticed you made no mention of Galtea being blind here...Alternate Continuity?

Either way excellent work, and take your time on updating, I think everyone would value quality over quantity with any fanfiction.

It's a good fic you have here. Looking forward to read more.

It would be hilarious and epic win if Helen is actually Raki's wife. LOL Those two would make quite a pair but it's Claire eventually.

Did Helen really that Raki's first sexually experience before Claire? Or was that just a dream? If it wasn't a dream, man, Claire would be **. LOL Who cares! The heck with her, Helen's awesome!

Yet another and most excellent chapter!

Please, update again soon. Your story is very well written and the plot is rather interresting. ^^

Well, nice chapter is nice chapter, be your update rate as it may be.Thankies.

I'll try to do a much better review later because I don't have the time right now, but looking through your story, I'm disappointed that you didn't stick with Helen,Deneve and Raki and introduced more characters. The three of are a hilarious and unique group that I can't say nobody has ever really tried to written before. All three of them are complete opposites to eachother and it makes for great story-telling.

Something to consider I suppose if you ever write a new Claymore story ;)