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| Miss Cow 2008-07-18 ch 1,  | abuseEr. . .How would they be able to reanact movies if they have nothing to see them with? Also, your story lacks description. How did they carry the lipstick? With their paws? I think not. Say something like "Poppypaw and Cinderpaw each grabbed tubes with squishy red stuff on the end(lipstick)and drew circles around another cat's eyes and a lightningbolt on his head, making fun of a strange box thing with a few TwoLegs on it, and one of them having black fur on his head, and a squiggly scar on his forehead." Try to describe everything. This is told in the cats point of view, so you need to have really good description of what they saw. ~misscow |
| Lefy (temporarily ALIVE!!!) 2008-07-06 ch 7, anon. | abuseAWESOMETASTICNESS!SEUSSQUIPIDELLIANSOME! FLOCCINAUCIHILIPIFICATIONNESS! And while I have NO idea whatsoever of what those words mean (well... I do know what the root words mean) I think they all mean "YUPPERDIDOODLEYNESS!" Congratulations on another humorous, random story! |
| Feathertail's Loyalty 2008-07-05 ch 7, | abuseMWAHAHAHA! I'VE RETURNED! *Clan cats scream* I'm going to miss this story - it was really fun to read and I was always excited to see updates. But I'll be looking forward to watching you "do other things with us [the ThunderClan cats], like locking us [them] in a room." |
| kbean 2008-06-10 ch 6, | abuseGingerstar must appear to give Firestar a talking-to! |
| Dewkit 2008-06-08 ch 6, | abuseUPDATES! |
| Feathertail's Loyalty 2008-06-08 ch 6, | abuseThanks for letting me make an appearance - it was really fun! Treewatcher's off to WindClan now, so she can pummel Nightcloud and Breezepaw! Hmm... I wonder which film/play/story I told Firestar to do... wait, what? |
| kbean 2008-06-02 ch 5, | abuse-screams with joy- WHOOT! -many more whoots later- |
| Puppyscruffy 2008-05-26 ch 2, | abuseI THINK I BURST A GUT FROM LAUGHING THIS IS SO FUNY!1 |
| Lilyheart Medicine Cat 2008-05-23 ch 5, | abuseHow about the wizard of oz! |
| Dewkit 2008-05-23 ch 5, | abuseAwsometastic |
| Leafecho 2008-05-23 ch 5, | abuseLove it! I just love torturing the clan cats with randomness... pink tutu! Hm... what if you did Eragon? If you can, make it better than the real movie (it was HORRIBLE! but that should be saved for another rant...). That would be awesome(mastic)! More ideas... Alvin and the Chipmunks? Fiddler on the Roof? Annie? Happy feet? The Pajama Game? What is it with me and musical movies? No other ideas... for now... wait until the next sugar rush... How come Spiderleg gets all the main roles, though? He does an awesome(mastic) job, I do admit. Great work on the story! |
| Feathertail's Loyalty 2008-05-23 ch 5, | abuseThat cameo appearance was even better than the first!! One day I should make a cameo appearance... that would be awesome... |
| Feathertail's Loyalty 2008-05-22 ch 4, | abuseCool, a cameo appearance! Anyway... Back to the Future would be AWESOME! I can see it now... or maybe I can't... hmm... well, it'd still be good! |
| Feathertail's Loyalty 2008-05-22 ch 3, | abuse"The curtain drew back and the brand new lights that Hollypaw had ‘acquired’ (EspeonSilverfire2 Big Kitty Lighting Equipment® PO BOX 6, I Luv Firestar Road, Kittypetville, MiddleOfNowhere) shone onto Sandstorm, centre stage, as she slotted Jaypaw’s Self-help CD into Berrypaw’s R2D2 costume." That, and when Berrypaw got poked in the eye, was really funny. |
| Dewkit 2008-05-21 ch 4, | abuseLots of PMT. Good, funny...Silverfire? Where'd you get her? |