|Reviews for Dark Intervention|
| SandyClaws93 2/9/11 . chapter 1
Haku really doesnt know who he's dealing with :P. This is a very brilliant idea, having Tobi and Akatsuki make an appearance alot earlier in the story, even better in the wave arc with changes already being shown. I cannot tell how giddy it makes me whenever Tobi goes 'Madara Mode' on an unsuspecting character :D. It looks like this story isn't gonna have a continuation based on how long and how many stories you've updated and posted.
I hope you recieve some inspiration in this particular story since it would be a waste to see it abandoned. I cam never find a good Madara/Tobi story that doesnt involve humor or romance. Anyways, hope you update it sometime, or if not I thank you for atleast giving us an introduction of this brilliant story.
| The Darkest wizard 9/26/10 . chapter 1
This is a great chapter! Please continue it soon!
| ManicBlueRose 3/25/09 . chapter 1
Love it, please update soon!
| PastaSentient 8/2/08 . chapter 1
Wow, this is insane. I really like the way this is going. I love your version of madara. It should be interesting to see how the twelve year old sasuke would react to the "truth". Anyways, please update soon. I really like this so far. Are there going to be any pairing for this fic? Just curious. Btw, you might want to consider upping the rating. I have a feeling this is going to get pretty gruesome, so just in case... Update soon!
| Ivanika 6/8/08 . chapter 1
Awesome! Tobi/Madara rule ya!
This story even has Haku in it and Zabuza for the beginning.
You rule yo!
Hope you update soon
| HawkofLight 5/13/08 . chapter 1
Wow, now this is a very interesting concept you have here. Having Tobi/Madara in the bridge battle and helping to observe with Zabuza and Haku is very original; in fact it's kinda rare to see a story that incorporates knowledge from the latest manga chapters so you've got me hooked. I'm particularly interested in where you're going to take the story from here as I was drawn in due to your summary. This chapter though was well-written and sets things up pretty nicely.
I look forward to any and all future updates.
| The Lizard Rebellion 5/13/08 . chapter 1
very interesting. this seems like it could turn out to be quite the read. good luck with the chapters to come!