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Hope-W
2008-09-06
ch 14,
abuseCliffie againg =[
But it's OK, i just feel that you are writting a marvelous cotinuation.
I want to read this last part from willian's POV, since teh part that Teague calls him.
Well i'm curious about this french conection ,and i feel that Ana's family migth have something to so with that. Am I on the right trak??
update soon please.
piratelvr35
2008-09-06
ch 14,
abuseOMG! I totally LOVED it. Sorry it took so long for me to respond, my computer crashed for like a week, and we finally got it up and runnung. It was amazing, update asap, please:). I am so exited about the next chapter.
Tasteless Rain
2008-09-06
ch 14,
abuseHaha, gotta love Charlotte! She's awesome!

Loved the chapter, sorry I can't say more... Up-date soon please!
ScarletRosePetal
2008-09-06
ch 14,
abuseOMG! Holy Crap!
UPDATE SOON! Or I will seriously hyperventilate and die!! I looved this chapter and I need the next one soon!

~ScarletRosePetal
firehottie
2008-09-06
ch 14,
abusecan't wait to read more! uPdate soon!
EdwardAMCullenFangirl62595
2008-09-06
ch 14,
abuseNice! I like this chapter as well. Update soon??
ElizabethTurner93
2008-09-06
ch 14,
abuseAww, that was an evil cliffhanger!! I'm sitting here and I do weird things when I read stuff like this (not too weird though) and my younger brother's like "What? What're you doing?" It was kind of funny. Anyway, great chapter!! Update soon, I can't wait to see what's next!!
starlinc
2008-09-06
ch 14,
abuseOMG, he remembers! Yeah! I love this chapter, and can't wait for the next one! He realizes he loves her, she loves him, and that they shared the dream, and they kissed. . . . I'm on cloud 9 with this chapter! Please update soon! I don't understand what's going on with The French thing. Is Ana's dad going to turn out to be the french king, or something? What's up with Norrie? Are the crystals making him veiwable? will that hurt him? Or possiblly bring him back to life? And is David going to take drastic measures b/c he likes Sammi? These are all just question/theories I have. Please tell me if I'm right, or way off!
PirateRN
2008-09-05
ch 14,
abuseOh I wonder what William's reaction will be...I'm glad he remembered the dream. Looking forward to the parental return! Good chapter!
hurricane1714
2008-09-05
ch 14,
abuseAh! I thought Sammi's daydream was real! You tease me so! The crystals they have something to do with death, that's why Norrie can be seen in the cave. A king of France... The only Frenchman I remember in AMTHGF is that guy who tried to take Ana *thinks* I'll think up something later after I reread those chapters of AMTHGF.

Advice for Sammi: Listan to your almost-grandmother. Listaning to a ex-pirate is not a good idea!

My your skates be sharp~
hurricane1714.
theAlyCat
2008-09-05
ch 14,
abuseLOL, snooty!Norrie. "I'm a ghost, and I'm still afraid of her!" XD loved it.

-aly
Nahr
2008-09-05
ch 14,
abuseUNDERSTATEMENT!

I love all Norries. :P

Once again awesome chapter. Though you know that already. :D
.x.BadWolfRose.x.
2008-09-05
ch 14,
abusearg! Cliffhanger!
I loved Sammi's little daydream... I actually thought it was real! :)
I also have an inkling as to what's going on with Norrie, but I'll wait till the next chapter to see if I'm on the right lines.

Long live Will and Sammi :)
x
frenchhornfreak
2008-09-05
ch 14,
abuseOMG you are SO mean. You got me. I so thought that Sammi's little daydream was real and then all of a sudden, it wasn't. You should have seen me though. I was flipping out. Hahaha I'm pathetic. Oh well...

Yeah, I'm a bit confused about the whole French men thing, but I have faith in that you'll explain it in due time. For now, I'll just sit in anticipation to find out what William does! AH I still think this is going to turn out badly. Very badly. AND HE REMEMBERED THE DREAM! YAY! Ah that made me super happy. :D And, of course, I love ghostie Norrie, but why was he glowing? Hm...

I loved the part when William is taking care of the children and they were completely out of control. Serves you right William! I did have a question though... just from what I interpreted, it seemed like maybe they were doing that to him because they're mad at what he did to Sammi? Maybe? Did that make sense? Hahaha. That's just what I picked up from it, but I could just be delusional. I've definitely gotten practically no sleep the past two or three days. Oh well...

Back on topic... I loved this chapter (even if you tricked me with the daydream...) and I can't wait for the next one! Haha and I just remembered... apparently you posted this even though Mar didn't finish her oneshot. I'm going to have to go bug her about that now. :D Great job, as usual!
Wills_Elizabeth23
2008-09-05
ch 14, anon.
abuseI honestly have no idea what could have been going on in the cave, but I trusted you all throughout AMTHGF, and I've trusted you this far through SCASSF, and you haven't let me down yet, so...I'll just trust that you're pretty sure you know what you're doing!

Wow! I can't believe William finally remembered the first dream! That was a surprise. Too bad for him (and probably Sammi, and, more than likely, Brad's face, too) that he didn't remember the second one. I can definitely see this turning sour in a hurry. If William is really convinced by her little act, he'll probably decide she's moved past him and will run straight back to Ophelia. Angst will ensue!

Good chapter. Loved the Back to the Future reference, BTW!
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