OMFG... LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!

Just had a heart attack and went to heaven. Wright(see what I did here) more please! I need it this is so well written and I likes it very muchly.

makes me smile

Hello there~

This is the first fiction I have ever read with the pairing of Phoenix and Edgeworth and to be honest the first fiction ever in the category of Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney. I have been horribly addicted to this storyline since the second sentence of the first chapter and as of this moment I am almost on my knees begging you to continue on to the next chapter and then maybe, and hopefully, the next. I really should be working on a Biology project but my mind is filled with the scenes of your fiction and I regret, well I wouldn't say regret ;), to say that I am now incapable of concentrating.

This fiction is beautifully written, you have a terrific talent for writing I hope you are aware of this. Your sentences are strung along smoothly and they flow with a lovely precision. The collection of dialogue is fantastic; I admire the obvious contrast of Edgeworth's sophisticated and refined speech and Phoenix's less than polished sort of speech. It all syncs together fantastically.

I also must mention that this sentence (and I quote) "Regardless of this, the sweet, seraphic smile remained on his face as he nodded once, then turned and left quietly..." (I suppose I have ended quote) was simply wonderful. It ended the chapter perfectly and it made my heart flutter and almost brought tears to my eyes. The use of "sweet and seraphic" brought on such emotion and with the simple use of words. I could only imagine the brilliantly saddening picture of Phoenix sweetly smiling while his heart breaks. And I know how sappy and dramatic that sounded there but it was my exact thoughts after finishing up the third chapter.

And now as I come to a close with this review I hope you acknowledge your talent for writing as well as continue this fiction as soon as you can find the time.

-ColorlessDreamxx

Keep updating, this is getting good.

TT^TT that's aweful edgy how could u say that to him after all that abuse you just said to him! *wipes a teary eye* poor wright!! this is rly rly good!! ya know?!? i like it a lot!! :3
keep writing!!

Guh.

*grips heart*

AW, how cute/sad!! *heart* Just wanna squeal for Phoenix's inner thoughts, and how he was talking to himself at the beginning of the chapter. ^.^

YAY, at this rate, I wouldn't mind a sad ending, cause you made it entirely believable. :D (although a happy one would be nice too, lol)

interesting chapter, now dwell on that kiss edgey and fall in love with him buahahahah xD

LOL.

It's been five months and I only just realized you'd set up another chapter.

I must be thick in the head.

Among other things.

XD Would it be stupid to say 'keep it up' five months later? xD

Another wonderful chapter! Well done! Sorry this is a bit late!

I really enjoyed this chapter as well! It's well written, flows smoothly, the characters are IC and I really like the dialogue between Miles and Phoenix since it's definitely spot on and exactly how I think that this kind of conversation would go between them at this point: a little hesitant, oftentimes misunderstandings-they may be lawyers but they have an awful time expressing their feelings outside of the courtroom!-erupt between the two of them, words spoken in either anger or haste that end up hurting them. I also like the way you set up the scenario as well. :)
As was the case with chapter 1, I can see the action unfolding in my mind's eye and have no trouble at all following the transitions. WELL DONE! :)

There were a few punctuation typos (again, nothing serious; just small stuff); some sentences sounded a bit too abrupt; some long sentences could be broken down into shorter ones without spoiling the original flavour of the sentence and some were a little bit choppy. Just little things and nothing horribly serious. :)I do it myself, too (embarrassingly so) and have many times. :)

I really enjoyed reading this fic and I'm looking forward to reading chapter 3! :)

Thank you VERY much for the dedication! ::bows, Edgeworth-style:: I am honoured! :)

I really enjoyed this story very much. I like the way you set the various scenes, it's well written and flows smoothly, the dialogue not in game-based is done well, the characters are wonderfully IC and I can follow the story easily as it moves along without any trouble at all. :)
I can also picture clearly the story as it unfolds in my mind and this is a very good thing; I enjoy a story much more when I can follow it inside my head. This means that the story is well written; if I can envision what's going on without having to make a concerted effort to do so, it increases my enjoyment of the story exponentially because I can simply flow along with it and enjoy it as it unfolds. (It's one of my little quirks. :) )

That being said, there were some things I noticed (just little things to be aware of, nothing big, bad or serious) that were a bit off.

1. Nick never refers to himself as "Nick" but "Phoenix" and, only once in his thoughts, "Wright." Only Maya, Pearls and Larry call him "Nick."

2. Some longer sentences can be broken down into two and still retain the same meaning; it flows a little better this way than in one long sentence. (I lack the space to provide the example since I don't want to get this cut short.)

3. Punctuation. For the most part, there weren't many punctuation typos although there were some sentences that didn't need the punctuation mark that was used and worked better using a different one.

For instance: Had Edgeworth really meant what he said; had their friendship meant so little to him? (The semi-colon can be removed and replaced with a question mark and the sentence will look like this: Had Edgeworth really meant what he said? Had their friendship meant so little to him?)

It doesn't lose any of it's meaning when the semi-colon is taken out and the question mark is put in in its place; Phoenix is simply asking himself two questions. It works much better as two rather than one.

These aren't horrifically huge or bad things; heck, I've done the same things a hundred times or more myself! They're just little things to be aware of and keep an eye out for. :)

This story is wonderful and I enjoyed reading it! :) GREAT WORK & WELL DONE! :)

interesting :D love it, will wait ^^

O_O
HOLY CRAP you ended on a cliff-hanger! What does Edgeworth mean by "a lot to talk about"? Why did he change his mind and let him in? What's going to happen? NEXT CHAPTER PLZ

Aw, I like it so far! This is really good! Please update!

this is still a good story i cant wait for the rest! i think that should be in the game an this is how pheonix should feel about edgeworth and that they have done what every one else would do. I can't wait for the rest. update soon!
PS congrates on a fab story

Good job, keep it up. You've got a good idea going and I can see the improvement in this chapter. I'm eager to read the next chapter and their conversation.

Yay! I'm so glad that you updated. Another excellent chapter, and I simply can't wait for more!!