good chapter & more please

Okay, where is Chole? Is she in an alternate world, the future, the past? Clark is in deep now, what with an irratated Lois and the Bizzaro Clark to deal with. I feel sorry for him. An excellent start, can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon.

OO! Whats up with Chloe?! And is Clark gonna get a verbal beating from Lois?! I'm interested! Can't wait for more

Great start!

quote: "Blood everywhere, staining the dank floors of the murky tunnel, swirling in strands like marble inside the snot-green water that pooled on the ground."

Excellent description!

Now Clark is in a fix! What will he tell Lois? And what happened to Chloe? Is she in our world now? Is she in the future?

What's going to happen? I have to know, please post more soon!

Great start, and very intrigueing!