your nasty

auu. her love for him is stronger than her hate/sorrow. nice story by da way.

pretty good you are a great writer but you should put the lyric in bold or italic... it would be easier to read... anyway nice job! ja ne!

Good?! It was GREAT!

An intresting ending. Dunno kniow if I could've had sex after feeling that bad about killing Hinata's family. Still I liked the story.

I'm not really a fan of song fics, but this one was pretty good. Keep up the great work.