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shortstef
2008-05-14
ch 1,
abuseNice, I like how you've made it obvious that she has feelings for him, even if she denies them as much as she wants
Willofthewisp
2008-05-13
ch 1,
abuseMy dear, you must know Belle's character inside and out. You've captured her intelligence, but also her modesty. I always felt she would be someone easy to talk to and you've proven she is. It's a very romantic one-shot. The only problem is that it's too short! Maybe you could do a series of her thoughts during different points in the movie. You're certainly up to it.
Saru Wolfe
2008-05-13
ch 1,
abuseYou're back! Anyway, this was a lovely little introspection. I like it.
ShadowedBeneathMoonlight
2008-05-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow. AMAZING! The ideas are so real and perfectly describe how Belle would feel if the situation turned that way. Better in fact, I don't think Belle would actually think that deeply about her feelings; but what do I know? :) This was totally amazing. I always love reading your writing. Wonderful job! :)

~Shadowed
SamoaPhoenix9
2008-05-13
ch 1,
abuseAw, this is really good. I loved "Dropping Eaves," I waited every day last summer for a new update. I like her musings about the Beast and his intentions.
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