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| shortstef 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseNice, I like how you've made it obvious that she has feelings for him, even if she denies them as much as she wants |
| Willofthewisp 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseMy dear, you must know Belle's character inside and out. You've captured her intelligence, but also her modesty. I always felt she would be someone easy to talk to and you've proven she is. It's a very romantic one-shot. The only problem is that it's too short! Maybe you could do a series of her thoughts during different points in the movie. You're certainly up to it. |
| Saru Wolfe 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseYou're back! Anyway, this was a lovely little introspection. I like it. |
| ShadowedBeneathMoonlight 2008-05-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. AMAZING! The ideas are so real and perfectly describe how Belle would feel if the situation turned that way. Better in fact, I don't think Belle would actually think that deeply about her feelings; but what do I know? :) This was totally amazing. I always love reading your writing. Wonderful job! :) ~Shadowed |
| SamoaPhoenix9 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseAw, this is really good. I loved "Dropping Eaves," I waited every day last summer for a new update. I like her musings about the Beast and his intentions. |