|Reviews for Perfect in Weakness|
| sakuya-kaleido 5/13/08 . chapter 1
awsome!but there will be some more parts? i mean another continuation is so cool but i prefer yopur naruto sakura pairing more is mucho more original! i mean i read sasuke and sakura always but never ever naruto and sakura and your story rocks!
| tcl7189 5/13/08 . chapter 1
| Animeaddict666 5/13/08 . chapter 1
Wonderful characterization, and I love how you had Sakura defend Naruto. Enjoyable to read, and I only wish there was more!
| Oyuki 5/13/08 . chapter 1
i loved the easy relationship between naruto/sakura/sai. that was good. and sakura's character was strong and she didn't give in to her sniveling with sasuke. i liked that. i don't like karin but she played her part. sasuke-kun was a little jealous of sai, huh? i really liked this.
| Asuka Kureru 5/13/08 . chapter 1
Hee! That was very fun and had some good one-liners. I also enjoyed the interaction with Naruto and Sai and the way Sakura cares about them and openly supports them even when they act like walking embarrassments. Socute. X3
The one I found a little OOC was Juugo; when he's not busy being crazy he's been shown to be quiet, withdrawn and even a little shy, and in this fic his frank and a little mean behavior seemed to me closer to what Suigetsu would have been like. (hey, Suigetsu likes animals, he can't be all bad. XD) Unless you went with the theory that the seal made his two personalities, maybe, but in that case it would need a mention.
Otherwise this was quite enjoyable. :) (... and Sai is wondering about InoSaku lesbianism. HE IS A MAN AFTER ALL! XD)
| The Purple Ghost 5/13/08 . chapter 1
Good gracious I love this story so f'ing hard right now! This completely rocked my night. I love your characterizations of Naruto and Sakura, especially. Other people always seem to make them pansies...but here they were so deliciously vicious in standing up for each other...
Hmm...and for once I liked Sasuke...which happens rarely because I find the inevitable angst-fest that follows to be wearying.
So thank you from the bottom of my deprived soul! This made my night...maybe my week...
| Ken and Kao forever 5/13/08 . chapter 1
Give me more! Give me more! Please do more stories in this universe. I think you have a good story in this. _
| LittleMana 5/13/08 . chapter 1
I suppose the only suggestion I have to make is that you cut out some of the swear words. Naruto and Sakura especially, since they don't seem to be the kind of people who swear all the time.
| blackdragonwingz 5/13/08 . chapter 1
God, I adore this story!
The insults are well placed, but the teasing at the end is almost too much. Can't you add another chapter to finish it off? And honestly, the last line really made my day. It almost had teh same affect as a punchline, you know?
Step 1: set up story
Step 2: Finish it with punchline
Step 3: break into a wide smile
Now, as for how uniform that response was, I don't know, but this is such a cute one-shot. Amusing, too. I'd like to add more, but since it's one review per chpater, if I have naything else to add, I might have to tack it on your other stories.
Wow, it's been about a full four years since I started to read your fanfics. Your writing stye has grown, I'll admit, and the perspective is maturely developed. I'm so proud of you!
Anyhoo, back to the story. I'd like to pride myself as someone who can distinguish between you-know-what and repertoires with literary merit. And wow, I promise you, I can write full fledged essays on your work, just analyzing speech technique and point of view. Perhaps I over analyze. Perhaps not. But whatever the case, ‘Perfect in Weakness” is refreshing in the sense that I have not read one story where Team Hebi comes to Konoha and are able to interact on the same level like yours. I always will admire Sakura, and love how you brought it to our attention that Sakura is a young woman, capable and independent. Whatever you write, all I ask of you is that I beseech you to make Sakura strong, like she’s wanted to since she lost Sasuke. I really shouldn’t write more, but I will in due time- until next time, Ravyn.
So, until then, may your pens never run out of ink, your pencils out of lead, your computer out of electricity, and your mind of creativity.
-Your most ardent fan, Cindy.
| katdemon1895 5/13/08 . chapter 1
excellent job, rather wishing that sakura had managed to damage karin just a bit but i suppose it wasn't the right setting for that, glad for the protectiveness of naruto
| lucie dans le ciel 5/13/08 . chapter 1
Wow, so nice! I really love how you portrayed Naruto-Sakura and Sakura-Sai relationships... I was hoping for a bit more Sasuke-Sakura action but honestly, it's more realistic like that! Anyway, it's great. _
And I agree with you, kickass Sakura really makes me happy! I'm tired of oh-god-I-saw-Sasuke-and-reverted-to-my-old-patheti c-12-years-old-self Sakura...
| emrei 5/13/08 . chapter 1
I haven't come across any of the fics you talked about (in fact, I have a hard time looking for fic in the current timeline).. anyways.
I loved this fic! It was so in-character. Everybody was spot-on. Loved the pinkie and red, the bitching. Sasuke. Naruto. I swear, I just adored this whole fic.
I feel terrible that I can't say anymore than that. I can usually point out a few things. Just that as a whole. this felt canon. Sai with his 'socially acceptable' haha!
| Jester08 5/13/08 . chapter 1
Wow, this was spectacular! I can't wait for more, so update really soon please and keep up the amazing work! _
| cutecrazyice 5/13/08 . chapter 1
Oh my God...I really like this! It's so funny, and the humor is so cool. Is this a oneshot? I hope not! It's really, really good! :)
| Falling Right Side-Up 5/13/08 . chapter 1
OMG! You're brilliant! Everyone is in character! I've been waiting forever for someone to capture the new personality of Sasuke, Naruto, Sai, and Sakura in one fic! Very, very good job! I love it. Update soon! This may actually be a SasukexSakura fic I can stomach.