Lovely! This wasn't exactly in-character-in fact, wildly OOC may be a suitable label, but it was OOC in all the ways that I would want it to be. It's like you took a fantasy straight out of my head and transcribed it to the page, so I am a-okay with all that transpired. Love the glimpse into the chaos, and I especially love the bonds you created between Naruto, Sakura, and Sai. Sometimes I think that if they were smart, this is what they would really be like together. :P Love canon, but I appreciate your presentation of this near alternate universe.

What a great little story. The humor was excellent and the emotions well written. Sai was appropriately Sai and hilarious. Rivalry, anger, revenge, sorta romantic, two thumbs up. It had a little bit of everything. I really liked it. Fresh, fun and realistic. The a/n at the beginning was super, too. Go Sakura.

Thanks for the story,

K&K

Hehehe, loved it! Karin's such a bitchy slut- she so desurves it!

Are you going to make it sassaku?

I apologize. I have no well rounded critique because all valid thoughts have been drowned out by deeply appreciative laughter at Sai. I LOVE his line "You are the red headed bitch no one likes. How are you?" I can just see him saying it LOL Fabulous work overall! But then again, you don't do bad work, only Fabulous and above. Can't wait til you find your muse again!

I feel like I've read this, but then again, everything in this fic seems new to me.

No matter. The portrayal of a realistic Sakura seriously trumps all. :) Karin really got it coming for her, and a Jugo/Naruto friendship is something I don't see often in SasuSaku(-ish) fics.

Beautifully written.

.Ever.

Love Sai.

Naruto and Jugo are hilarious.

And the ending is just... wonderful. If only this was how it happened.

ZOMG this is amazing. XD I'm in love! You did a great job on this, congrats. lessthanthree

Lol, this is so funny. I love it :)

I really like how you wrote this. It seems like how Sakura and Naruto would act.

Though I'm sure Sai would have mocked Sasuke without really realizing it.

And he probably would have labeled Jugo as crazy or something.

I like how Sakura acted with Karin, though she should have gotten to punch her at least once ;)

Great story!

You will continue, yes? I like it. And I like feisty and somewhat confused Sakura.

thank you, thank you, thank you. i am sick and tired of weak crybaby sakura..she kicks ass and we all noe it.

I love Juugo and Naruto's interaction in here. :)

Great story)

Oh my, I really loved this. It was extremely well written and I'm proud to say that this is one of the few fics that had me smiling the entire time. You got their characters perfectly and the moments with Sai had me laughing out loud to myself. Thank you for writing this wonderful story and using proper English while doing it.