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Reviews for: Death’s Privilege
Chris St Thomas
2008-05-17 . chapter 1
outstanding.
you hit all the points we'd expect but you had a few surprises as well.

st thomas
dakota423
2008-05-14 . chapter 1
This is a very nice piece, very well written. I enjoyed it.
Myxale
2008-05-14 . chapter 1
Wow, that was intense!

And what's with those "John dies" fics lately! ;)

Love the last moments between them. And the Love...ouch, so bittersweet.

That's how I imagine it would be! That's how a love between John and Cam would look like! OR at least one of the ways the love could turn out!

The way Cam blurted out the words...in return; so off beat was typically her.

Cheers and kudos!

PS. Just bein' curious, what were the other options where Cam states "there are still options!":

Kudos and cheers!
triggercini
2008-05-13 . chapter 1
Two words: Freaking Brilliant! I absolutely loved it. Characterizations were spot on and it was wonderfully bittersweet. Keep it up!
C.Isaac
2008-05-13 . chapter 1
There are a few grammatical errors in it. A You're instead of Your and similar errors like that.

Otherwise? Freaking heartwrenching. I don't really have any other words.
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