Great story thanks for sharing it !

means fear of long words. now where are my cookies?

awesome! i luv this story!

Hi! Great chapter! I don't want it to end even if it's already complete... Could you give me a link for the picture? I've looked at KadasaMori on DA but coudn't find the picture! Please help me!

is the fear of long words! YAY! _

Haha it's a fear of big words, right?

This was very original! I really enjoyed it. Thanks. -Clare

Haha! Arnie. *faves*

Lighthearted while still maintaining some suspense. Awesome skill-age there.

You're a strange girl.

Japanese names were very random.

Liked the story.

Happy belated b-day, dude.

bravo!I love Arnie! lol, it was very well done and very creative! Cant wait to read your next one.

CUTE! I love that she became friends with the dragon. Poor guy, getting biscut-talked to for his breath, though Sarah /could/ introduce him to tooth-paste and mouthwash. Every dragon should have good teeth.

And thus, in this chapter, the children of Kira start coming. I loved the ending. I felt really bad for Jareth in the beginning, what with all of the "bodyguard" stuff, but then realized that he gets her back just as bad by insulting her weight. Their relationship is screwey, yet adorable. Honestly, I had such a hard time imagining Jareth saying "clickety-clackity" that I scrunched my face up. I guess I've really been paying too much attention to somber Bowie's. Though Monte is more of a comedian... -scrunches face again- nope, still can only see 19 saying that. I don't even know why. He doesn't look a /thing/ like the type to say that. I guess I just like that year of Bowie too much for my own good.

I'm proud of you for finishing this fic. I shall go on to read 'Of Demons and Goblin Kings' later, as it is now my bed time, and I have school tomorrow. Happy Halloween in case I don't review you again by then. Woo! I'm totally gonna be a renaissance lady! Got my hair planned out and everything. Now I just need to find out how to do my makeup... crud... Woo! candy!

thank you. great story!

Aw! This was so effin cute!

-laughs maniacly- GREAT ending, though I am sad to see it go. I truly enjoyed this story. Great non-happily ever after...

And the dragon.

Is.

Amazing.

Life is good (other than the fact the story is over) Reading your story Market Spice Tea (fresh from Pike Place Market tea shoppe) and the Death Note Soundtrack on the stereo. Only thing that could be better is if I could get rid of the bleeping writers block *smile* keep up the great work.

Affie and Rysh

(who just peeked at the story and is giving a thumbs up too)