okay totally forget what i said in my last review! finish this story! please!

very confusing...it's some of your best work, but i can barely understand it.

Interesting plot, good description and enough dialog, all in all a really good story so far. Maybe just give us a little more info on Daemon (What had he done to get mind wiped, why, etc.), but besides from that, everything seems thought out. I like it so far and can't wait to read more.

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