I always enjoy all things Niko realted. Nice getting a looking into his head.

I really enjoyed this too. This scene in the book is awesome and to see it from Nik's POV was really cool. I think looking at him from Cal's perspective, its easy to see Nik on a superficial level, but getting inside his head...? Somewhat more problematic and yet you handled it gracefully. You built all of his fears to realistic proportions, and I loved seeing how he felt.

Loved it! Great insight into Niko's head. I'm sometimes so unsure of what he's really thinking, like he's one big mystery... But I could really see him in here.
Thanks for sharing!

Wow. You have a knack for the Leandros Brothers. I like the way you conveyed Niko's panic while still making him seem calm. Wonderful job and great writing.

VERY delicious!

But wasn't Cal 14 when he was taken?

Two years in Hell was two days on the outside.. followed by four years on the run?

Yay for new Rob Thurman fics! I liked this--it was nice to get some insight from Niko's POV of that evening.

By the way, I'm archiving this story in my C2 for RT fics. I hope you don't mind (I'll take it off if you do). It's called A Bug in My Coke, and if you want to access it, just find the link in my profile.

Again, nice job. I hope to see more from you.