I have conflicting feelings about this chapter. I absolutely LOVE your writing style i haven't the foggiest why, but i do...
HOWEVER, i think it might have been better to bring Aerith back in a latter chapter so it wouldn't feel rushed.
Regardless, UPDATE SOON!

-MetroDyne

This story is looking good! Abit shorter than i like my chapters, but something about your writing style hooks me. The only complaint i have is the beginning when it was like attack of the periods.
I don't know too much about grammer (i hated english), but they seemed out of place... hm... Oh well. Hope you keep this story going!

-MetroDyne